Where Do You Want To Live?
Location and lifestyle5 total reviews
Comment from Ronni
Thesis,
you certainly score the temptation points for these two choice places to rent.
So many choose them every day, almost any place. No hesitation, no
conscience even amidst perpetual Happy Hours and spirited paradise
elixirs and pleasures ad infinitum! Living It hot and cool in all the
wanton ways and exploitations evermore.
Good luck with your prompt entry ... Exceptional presentation.
Perfect Pic choice too...
Best wishes always, Ronni
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Thesis,
you certainly score the temptation points for these two choice places to rent.
So many choose them every day, almost any place. No hesitation, no
conscience even amidst perpetual Happy Hours and spirited paradise
elixirs and pleasures ad infinitum! Living It hot and cool in all the
wanton ways and exploitations evermore.
Good luck with your prompt entry ... Exceptional presentation.
Perfect Pic choice too...
Best wishes always, Ronni
Comment Written 20-Apr-2017
Comment from kathleenspalding
Haha! Good ones! Never heard "the other place" described in such painless terms, LOL! Very well written, excellent artwork. Just a couple things for your consideration -
maybe delete the comma after "veiws"?
maybe...offset by (insert "the") free ale...
That's it. Great job!
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Haha! Good ones! Never heard "the other place" described in such painless terms, LOL! Very well written, excellent artwork. Just a couple things for your consideration -
maybe delete the comma after "veiws"?
maybe...offset by (insert "the") free ale...
That's it. Great job!
Comment Written 31-Mar-2017
Comment from mbroyles2
This is really good.
You actually make both places sound excellent.
An isn't that what an ad should do? Even if the places aren't as advertised?
Great job!
Michael
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This is really good.
You actually make both places sound excellent.
An isn't that what an ad should do? Even if the places aren't as advertised?
Great job!
Michael
Comment Written 31-Mar-2017
Comment from Mustang Patty
Your ads for Heaven and hell are entertaining and well written. You added some nice touches, like - wine from water - and - clothing, of course, is optional.
The ads are well written. Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
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Your ads for Heaven and hell are entertaining and well written. You added some nice touches, like - wine from water - and - clothing, of course, is optional.
The ads are well written. Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 31-Mar-2017
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
Great work! I can definitely see the difference between the two. I also know which one I'd rather live in, too. You described the two places in great detail. Thank you for sharing your work. Good luck with future writings!
Nicole
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Great work! I can definitely see the difference between the two. I also know which one I'd rather live in, too. You described the two places in great detail. Thank you for sharing your work. Good luck with future writings!
Nicole
Comment Written 30-Mar-2017
