Dream-Flying
the wonders of dreaming20 total reviews
Comment from Irish Rain
Well, I was going to say 'Good Luck' in this contest, but I see you already won it with this delightful, original entry!! Truly magical...loved it!! Blessings...
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Well, I was going to say 'Good Luck' in this contest, but I see you already won it with this delightful, original entry!! Truly magical...loved it!! Blessings...
Comment Written 02-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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well, I appreciate your well wishes anyway.
wasn't able to copy or print your wonderful dandelion poem. Now THAT is magical!
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Aww...you can copy it out by hand, re-type it on your computer, to print out. Thank you!!
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well sure. was being lazy. will do.
Comment from Thal1959
This is very well done in all regards. The rhymes are clean and proper, the rhythm is stable, and the sentiment of the verses is charming and interesting.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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This is very well done in all regards. The rhymes are clean and proper, the rhythm is stable, and the sentiment of the verses is charming and interesting.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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thank you very much.
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You're welcome.
Comment from rjuselius
this is a well deserved win dear pome lover! the wording is very vivid and insightful as the rhyming itself is spot on. (no pun intended, lol)
thank you for sharing!
blessings!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2017
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this is a well deserved win dear pome lover! the wording is very vivid and insightful as the rhyming itself is spot on. (no pun intended, lol)
thank you for sharing!
blessings!
rebekka x
Comment Written 31-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2017
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many thanks! appreciate your great review and kind words.
pl
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem you penned for the write a poem for a child. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. This would be fun to read to our three year old grandson! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2017
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This is a very well written poem you penned for the write a poem for a child. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. This would be fun to read to our three year old grandson! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 31-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2017
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thank you! Hope you do and he likes it.:)
Comment from Marvin Calloway
This is a poem that stays strong throughout it's six stanzas, never letting up for a word. It's a story that would please parents and children alike.
The climatic kiss--the perfect ending.
Marv
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2017
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This is a poem that stays strong throughout it's six stanzas, never letting up for a word. It's a story that would please parents and children alike.
The climatic kiss--the perfect ending.
Marv
Comment Written 31-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2017
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thank you, Marvin! Your kind words are much appreciated! And thank you for the 6! yay!
Katharine - pome lover
Comment from M. Kari Barr
A cute poem. Congratulations on the contest results.
I enjoyed the imagery and the flow was nice too.
This would be very nice made into a bedtime picture book.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2017
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A cute poem. Congratulations on the contest results.
I enjoyed the imagery and the flow was nice too.
This would be very nice made into a bedtime picture book.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2017
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thank you. just might give it a shot.
pome lover
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is well written full of imagination which is what the children would like an adventure with very good artwork choice good luck regards Jill
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2017
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Yes this is well written full of imagination which is what the children would like an adventure with very good artwork choice good luck regards Jill
Comment Written 30-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2017
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thank you!
Comment from Bill Schott
This children's poem, Dream Flying, has all sorts of cool happenings that would be entertaining and highly believable in the midst of sleeping. Nice.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2017
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This children's poem, Dream Flying, has all sorts of cool happenings that would be entertaining and highly believable in the midst of sleeping. Nice.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2017
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thank you
Comment from marybell1
A really beautiful children's story. - I believe everything should be perfect in a child's world as it doesn't last long enough. Your poem rhymed really lovely along with your choice of picture.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017
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A really beautiful children's story. - I believe everything should be perfect in a child's world as it doesn't last long enough. Your poem rhymed really lovely along with your choice of picture.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017
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Thank you very much! I believe so, too.
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Poet,
What a sweet and fun, imaginative poem for children! I can see how a child would enjoy having this read to them - so it makes a good entry for this contest. Well done! My only negative remark is the punctuation. I would suggest using lower case punctuation at the start of new sentences where it's called for. Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017
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Dear Mystery Poet,
What a sweet and fun, imaginative poem for children! I can see how a child would enjoy having this read to them - so it makes a good entry for this contest. Well done! My only negative remark is the punctuation. I would suggest using lower case punctuation at the start of new sentences where it's called for. Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 29-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017
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oops. thanks, Robyn.
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