Comment from MelB

Excellent

This was a fun play on the phrase, "a wolf in sheep's clothing". The sheep and the ram certainly had fun and fooled the dogs. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017

Thanks much for reading and your kind comments.

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

A good entry for the competition. I was wondering where you were taking it and the last line is really good.

Boy, you fellas sure worked up a thirst. I just filled that. Come on in for a spell and I'll git ya - watch for when you are using dialectal tics and spelling that they remain consistent you/ya.

"The smaller dog barked, "We don't know - delete the speech marks at the beginning here.

"We'll, see about that." - don't need the comma after we'll.

"I owe them a favor," the wolf, growled. - comma after wolf is unnecessary.

All the best
GMG

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017

Thanks so much for the great corrections. Will have to wait until i get to a computer. Too hard to correct on this phone.

Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson

Excellent

This was a very cute piece. Quite clever a wolf costume lol.
This should do well in contest.
Best of luck to you. Happy Friday.
~~~Kerry~~~~

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017

Thanks so much.

reply by Kerry Foley Robinson on 26-Mar-2017

Your welcome

Comment from Mustang Patty

Good

This is a clever story for the disguised contest prompt. Sheep are the kind of animal one can envision as being much more clever than meets the eye. Thank you for sharing,
A few nits: The dogs ahead shivered, and begin running. (Tense - is it began or do you want to change the tense of the sentence?)
barking and biingt (biting)
~patty~

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2017

Thanks for reading and the ideas.

Comment from RodG

Excellent

This almost read like a fable and I am sure it would appeal to a wide audience, including children. We like to see the sheep outwit the dogs and earn proper treatment. Great closer.

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2017

Thanks much for reading!

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I like the reversal of the old saying "wolf in sheep's clothing". To "sheep in wolf's clothing". The sheep were certainly smarter than the dogs, who treated the sheep with respect after that. Great entry in this "disguised" writing contest, the poor old doggies copping a little "role reversal" well done, great entry, plot and characters, good luck, blessings, Roy
Typo: Barking and (biingt) biting?

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2017

Thanks Roy, appreciate you reading and the thoughtful review.