I 'll write again ...
I know I will23 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
After traveling life's treacherous road for many a year, I too have found my way back to a passion I sorely missed. My husband wanted me to write again and your beautiful and inspiring poem touched the perfect spot. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
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After traveling life's treacherous road for many a year, I too have found my way back to a passion I sorely missed. My husband wanted me to write again and your beautiful and inspiring poem touched the perfect spot. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
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Thank you. I am pleased I was helpful? unfortunately, so far, I have not written anymore. But... I will write again. Kind regards, Marijke :)
Comment from misscookie
Hello welcome back
sometime Gods says you need a break
and due time your mind, body, soul and muse will get your motors going again.
Thank you for sharing this uplifting write.
Cookie
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2017
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Hello welcome back
sometime Gods says you need a break
and due time your mind, body, soul and muse will get your motors going again.
Thank you for sharing this uplifting write.
Cookie
Comment Written 23-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2017
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Thank you so much, Cookie. I'm pleased to be back, and to see so many old friends still here. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)
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Your'e very welcome. it's good to see your work in print again.
Have a nice week end.
Cookie
Comment from Aussie
Gorgeous photo of grandma and baby. Yes, you will write again, it is in our blood. A watched pot never boils, and when we walk away for a while, the dinner gets cooked. Nice to see you pop in with a little poem. I was wondering? XXK
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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Gorgeous photo of grandma and baby. Yes, you will write again, it is in our blood. A watched pot never boils, and when we walk away for a while, the dinner gets cooked. Nice to see you pop in with a little poem. I was wondering? XXK
Comment Written 22-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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Thanks, Kay. It is a nice photo. Thanks also for your kind comments and observations. Nice to see you're still here. Warmest regards, Marijke :o) xxxx
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very good artwork.
-Glad to see you, Marijke.
-Nice poem about how that
muse will return, and I know
you will be sharing more.
-You are a good writer.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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-Very good artwork.
-Glad to see you, Marijke.
-Nice poem about how that
muse will return, and I know
you will be sharing more.
-You are a good writer.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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Thanks, Pam, for your kind comments and observations. Nice to see you're still here. Warmest regards, Marijke :o) xxxx
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You are quite welcome.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Marijke, well you may be waiting for your muse but I think he has already arrived. A very nice poem in 8,6,8,6 syllable form maintained throughout, apart from line- 'Be it essay be it verse' which has seven syllables' - just a small detail in an otherwise lovely poem. Warm regards Dorothy x and keep writing.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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Hi Marijke, well you may be waiting for your muse but I think he has already arrived. A very nice poem in 8,6,8,6 syllable form maintained throughout, apart from line- 'Be it essay be it verse' which has seven syllables' - just a small detail in an otherwise lovely poem. Warm regards Dorothy x and keep writing.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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Thanks, Dorothy, for your kind comments and generous review. Warmest regards, Marijke :o) xxxx
Comment from dragonpoet
This sounds like a bad case of writer's block. It seems a must has hit and hopefully will stay for a long time. I like the repetition. It helps show how much writing means
to the speaker in the poem.
I like how the motion in the artwork shows how motion changes an object.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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This sounds like a bad case of writer's block. It seems a must has hit and hopefully will stay for a long time. I like the repetition. It helps show how much writing means
to the speaker in the poem.
I like how the motion in the artwork shows how motion changes an object.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 22-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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Thanks, dragonpoet, for your kind comments and generous review. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)
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You are so kindly welcome.
Enjoy your day
dp
Comment from melyuki
Hooray .. there you are in great form my friend. what a delightfully encouraging poem you've created.. I'm so glad you let the pen take you by the heart and scribe this awesome little verse Marijke. Bet it felt good to create once more.. Keep the inspiration going .. ( when time permits).. You are a fabulous writer... sending bundles of happy smiles and hugs your way, luv mel xox
amazing artwork.. really grabs the eye ... cheers again.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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Hooray .. there you are in great form my friend. what a delightfully encouraging poem you've created.. I'm so glad you let the pen take you by the heart and scribe this awesome little verse Marijke. Bet it felt good to create once more.. Keep the inspiration going .. ( when time permits).. You are a fabulous writer... sending bundles of happy smiles and hugs your way, luv mel xox
amazing artwork.. really grabs the eye ... cheers again.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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Wow... thank you Mel, for your very generous review and your words of encouragement. Yes... I did it. Now to follow through. And yes, you are right, it did feel good. Short but sweet, I guess. Thanks again my friend, and sending you back bundles of happy smiles and hugs. Love and warmest regards, Marijke :o)
Comment from ~Dovey
Hi Marijke:
It is good to have you back with us. I had been wondering. When the muse hijacks our pen, it should be a crime... but if we lock them up, then where would we be? lol Your ab, cb rhyme scheme was delightful. I'll be looking forward to more soon!
Kim
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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Hi Marijke:
It is good to have you back with us. I had been wondering. When the muse hijacks our pen, it should be a crime... but if we lock them up, then where would we be? lol Your ab, cb rhyme scheme was delightful. I'll be looking forward to more soon!
Kim
Comment Written 22-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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Kim, thank you so much for your kind review and comments. Warmest regards, I look forward to catching up with all my 'old' friends on FS. Warmest regards, Marijke :o) xxx
Comment from rama devi
Welcome back! I was happy to see your name in my inbox. Muses sometimes take long sabbaticals but they always come back eventually. I enjoyed this clever writer's block poem
Good flow, fine rhyming. Good use of rhythmic repetition. Fine phonetics too!
Spag suggestion (optional):
One day(,) I'll grab my pen
nice medley of F and W sounds here:
The words will flow - effortlessly
*suggestion:
Be it essay(,) be it verse
Perfect closing note:
But I am sure I'll write again
... for better or for worse
Implying you are 'married' to your muse, so to speak.
Nice!
Warmly, rd
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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Welcome back! I was happy to see your name in my inbox. Muses sometimes take long sabbaticals but they always come back eventually. I enjoyed this clever writer's block poem
Good flow, fine rhyming. Good use of rhythmic repetition. Fine phonetics too!
Spag suggestion (optional):
One day(,) I'll grab my pen
nice medley of F and W sounds here:
The words will flow - effortlessly
*suggestion:
Be it essay(,) be it verse
Perfect closing note:
But I am sure I'll write again
... for better or for worse
Implying you are 'married' to your muse, so to speak.
Nice!
Warmly, rd
Comment Written 21-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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Rama, thank you so much for your kind review and comments. Warmest regards, I look forward to catching up with all my 'old' friends on FS. Warmest regards, Marijke :o) xxx
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Thank you, Marijke - so nice you're back. Warmest Regards! xxx
Comment from MissMerri
Dear friend, how wonderful to see you here! I loved this poem and am especially thankful for its message. You worded it so well, and with perfect meter and abcb rhymes, it is a pure delight to read. I love the picture you used too. Thank you for sharing this. It is just great to have you back again. MM
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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Dear friend, how wonderful to see you here! I loved this poem and am especially thankful for its message. You worded it so well, and with perfect meter and abcb rhymes, it is a pure delight to read. I love the picture you used too. Thank you for sharing this. It is just great to have you back again. MM
Comment Written 21-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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Merri, thank you so much for your kind and generous six star review and comments. I look forward to catching up with all my 'old' friends on FS, and some new ones. Nice to see you are still here, my friend. Warmest regards, Marijke :o) xxx
