Comment from Oatmeal

Exceptional

Mustang P,

Thoughts are expressed and described well. Very nicely written work. Perfectly arranged and formatted. Good flow. Well chosen words, colorful arrangement and wonderfully decorated thoughts. Telling things very plain and comprehensible.
Understandable.

There was no SPAG. No typos. No homophones. No problems at all.

You wrote this one very well.

I look forward to seeing you again.

Love you,

Oatmeal

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017

Thank you so much for your review. I appreciate the shiny stars, and your kind thoughts,
~patty~

Comment from Thamp

Excellent

Very nice. Every spouse should do the same for the other and we would have less arguments and divorce. You made my eyes tear up a bit, true love always does that to me. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017

Thank you so much for your thoughtful review,
~patty~

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

HI,
I loved your poem you wrote about you husband. It is wonderful to still have those emotions after years of marriage.
Regards to the photo taken when you both were younger, we still are the same people in our loved ones eyes.

Well done
Mary

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017

Thank you for stopping by to read and review, Mary. Yes, I am a lucky woman, and fortunate that he realizes his luck with me, too.
~patty~

reply by Jackarrie on 21-Mar-2017

Oh yes it has to work from both sides to be a great union, xx

Comment from doggymad

Excellent

This was a really sweet poem. It is full of the simple things that display love and respect.

It is so wonderful to bask in the warmth of anothers arms before heading forth to greet the day. The dog barking a welcome makes for a beautiful scene

hugs

Freda

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017

Thank you for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your comments and warm encouragement,
~patty~

Comment from Rlegel99

Excellent

Fun poem about a person's day. I like your word choice. This poem flows well. The picture adds to the subject matter. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017

Thank you for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your comments,
~patty~

Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hello Mustangpatty1029, a fun love poem. Of special note:

The dogs bark a welcome,
I give him a hug

and:
In his arms for the night,
My heart takes flight

(Emotions of love; actions speak louder than words - very nice.)

Thanks for sharing your photo and author's notes.
Keep the blue waters flowing and the love embers glowing.

LateBloomer

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017

Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I am a very lucky woman.
~patty~

Comment from Margaret Snowdon

Excellent

The dogs bark a welcome,
I give him a hug
I've been lonesome,
But for now, I'm snug
In his arms for the night,
My heart takes flight

this is just how it should be - we are so blessed to have found true love in our lifetime, Patty -- my husband's beard is more grey than black now, and his hair is silvery - but his eyes are still a deep chocolate colour - something I noticed first about him so many years ago.

I loved your sentimental poem.

Margaret

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017

Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I am a very lucky woman.
~patty~

Comment from Jesse James Doty

Excellent

Wonderful presentation! Even though the photo's old, it still says a lot, and adds much to the poem. You write very well, using a descriptive style of a typical morning and day for you. I like your choice of words and the ease of flow, within the poem. I enjoyed reading this very much. You sound like a lucky and happy person. I am glad for you.
Take care, Jesse

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017

Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I am a very lucky and happy person. I've decided to concentrate on all the good in my life, and leave the rest behind. I appreciate your kind words and warm encouragement,
~patty~

reply by Jesse James Doty on 21-Mar-2017

Sounds like a good plan, Patty.

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

Ahhh, this is so sweet. It is simply put but that is often the best way to say 'I love you' to someone:)

Twelve hours away a day is a long time. Great tribute poem:)

teresa

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017

Thank you for stopping by to read and review. My hubby only works a ten hour day - (Only), but with the commute, he is gone for twelve hours. We are lucky to have our evenings and weekends together.
~patty~

Comment from nancyrabbrose

Excellent

You have crafted a lovely poem about you and your hubby. It shows a huge amount of love that you feel for him. And, how nice, the picture of you two a few years ago. It gives me heart to read such a great poem of a warm and comfortable love. Well done.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017

Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. This was a love poem, and one of thanksgiving. I realize just how blessed I am.
~patty~