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Kennel Pups Snickering

Making Fun Of Others,Jeez!

2 total reviews 
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
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'One day the boss told them," you all will become hunters wearing hunting gear
Then other pups will be making fun of you too and you won't like theirs snears(sneers).
So mind your manners while you are here. Keep an open mind don't show fear."
We have been picked as the number one dog hunting camp in all of Montana this year. ' Top dog in the truest sense! I love it for its humour,cleverness and wit, absolutely super love Meia and good luck in the competition love Meia x

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 20-Mar-2017
    Thank you for your kindness and support
Comment from Mustang Patty
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While the poem told a good story, the punctuation and spelling marred its meaning. For instance in the nit, the wrong form of there was used. Punctuation would let the lines flow, and allow the poem to make more sense,
A nit: long before they heard voices go by their (there)
~patty~

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 20-Mar-2017
    Thanks for your time