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Comment from nomi338
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Some people are not a good fit among normal human beings. People who are anti social, people who hate anyone that does not look like themselves, etc. These people should be separated, lest they, like a rotten apple spoil the whole bunch.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2017
    Thank you, nomi, for reviewing this. Bill
Comment from Teri7
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You know I didn't understand it at all but you had perfect 5-7-5 syllables. I enjoyed reading and reviewing! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2017
    Thanks, Teri
Comment from Peter@Poole
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This is a neat play on words, Bill, and it reminds me of how my Dad used to amuse us kids by frequently composing them. He had a major influence on me, instilling the joy of word play, both serious and jocular. Peter

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
    Thank you, Peter, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from MaggieF
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Ha ha ha, I was going to skip this one because it is early in the morning and I didn't think I was up to something heavy but then I thought someone had bothered to write it, I'm so glad I did, thank you. MaggieF

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
    Thanks, Maggie
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
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That was a hilarious 5-7-5 Bill.
Outstanding job. Well written with great humor.
Best wishes to you.
~Kerry~

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
    Thanks, Kerry