A Smile is Everything
a little dental humor10 total reviews
Comment from Flossie1
Had to come back to this, although I am enjoying all of your portfolio.
I am drawn to humorous poetry because of the tickle it delivers, like a little tonic for our rather strange times. Thank you!
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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Had to come back to this, although I am enjoying all of your portfolio.
I am drawn to humorous poetry because of the tickle it delivers, like a little tonic for our rather strange times. Thank you!
Comment Written 25-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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Flossie, I hope you know how wonderful it makes me feel that you are reading things in my portfolio! Goodness, I am delighted and flattered.
Before I joined Fanstory, I just wrote for children, and I tended to be silly a lot, As you can see, it carried over.
You have really made me feel like a million dollars and I thank you! Also thanks for the 6 stars!! Much appreciated!
Katharine - pome lover
Comment from Heidi M
How funny! Congratulations on winning the dialogue only contest! This is written from a perspective many of us know all too well.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2017
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How funny! Congratulations on winning the dialogue only contest! This is written from a perspective many of us know all too well.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2017
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thang u! :)
Comment from Marvin Calloway
at was ood. (That was good.)
It took me a while to figure it out, but it was wortit. This story contained lots of humor. A unique premise.
I hope you're not still feeling the pain of your research.
Marv
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2017
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at was ood. (That was good.)
It took me a while to figure it out, but it was wortit. This story contained lots of humor. A unique premise.
I hope you're not still feeling the pain of your research.
Marv
Comment Written 18-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2017
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.thang, arv. At was ery ni uh you!
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
It took a while to appropriate the speech but once there this is a fun piece.
An I ssm-ssm-i-ile a lah! A lah! - need closing speech marks here.
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2017
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Hi there,
It took a while to appropriate the speech but once there this is a fun piece.
An I ssm-ssm-i-ile a lah! A lah! - need closing speech marks here.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 17-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2017
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Thang ver muh! :)
PL
Comment from Mustang Patty
This is a good story. I enjoyed puzzling out his responses, but sometimes I had to read the next line to totally understand. Congratulations on winning the contest.
~patty~
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2017
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This is a good story. I enjoyed puzzling out his responses, but sometimes I had to read the next line to totally understand. Congratulations on winning the contest.
~patty~
Comment Written 17-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2017
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thang ver muh! :)
PL
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute entry for the Dialogue Only prompt that you penned. It truly sounds like a visit to the dentist office. You used very good descriptive wording. Best wishes in the contest! Teri
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
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This is a very cute entry for the Dialogue Only prompt that you penned. It truly sounds like a visit to the dentist office. You used very good descriptive wording. Best wishes in the contest! Teri
Comment Written 15-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
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thank you so much! I appreciate your kind words!
Comment from lyenochka
Very humorously written. I always wonder why the dentist/hygienist insists on talking when they have their hands in your mouth. Good use of the dialog to create the humor!
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
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Very humorously written. I always wonder why the dentist/hygienist insists on talking when they have their hands in your mouth. Good use of the dialog to create the humor!
Comment Written 15-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
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thank you kindly. You know it's funny but my hygienist (female) understands me perfectly and we chat off and on the whole time. We also laugh a lot. (takes a bit longer).
Thanks again,
pome lover
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Dialogues between dentist and smiley patient are humorous in the denting practice are real and the story depicts doctor's sense of humour in replacing a tooth is entertaining, I liked and enjoyed the decayed little humour interaction.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
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Dialogues between dentist and smiley patient are humorous in the denting practice are real and the story depicts doctor's sense of humour in replacing a tooth is entertaining, I liked and enjoyed the decayed little humour interaction.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
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thanks, ALD -
Your reviews are very interesting with your own unique style of writing - for instance, "decayed little humor." ha!
Anyway, many thanks and I'm very glad you liked it!
pome lover
Comment from emptypage
Excellent use of dialogue. Everything I write depends on dialogue, so I appreciate it greatly. I've yet to try to enter these dialogue only contests.
You made a nice story with just that. Everyone thinks we need tags and backstory and details...and s sometimes we do. But not here.
Great job.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
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Excellent use of dialogue. Everything I write depends on dialogue, so I appreciate it greatly. I've yet to try to enter these dialogue only contests.
You made a nice story with just that. Everyone thinks we need tags and backstory and details...and s sometimes we do. But not here.
Great job.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
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thank you very much! You made my day!
And you should try a dialogue only contest. Give it a shot. It's fun.
Thanks again,
pome lover
Comment from Sis Cat
This "little dental humor" is excellent. You show your chops at both dialogue and humor in this story about a man who refuses to have the dentist pull his teeth because it would ruin his smile. The patient's garbled dialogue was perfect to show his speech impediment and frustration. This is a highly creative and imaginative story. Thank you for sharing. I wish you success in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2017
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This "little dental humor" is excellent. You show your chops at both dialogue and humor in this story about a man who refuses to have the dentist pull his teeth because it would ruin his smile. The patient's garbled dialogue was perfect to show his speech impediment and frustration. This is a highly creative and imaginative story. Thank you for sharing. I wish you success in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2017
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well, that made me smile! thank you!
PL
