Darkness
Lanturne contest entry36 total reviews
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Kerry, Excellent Lanturne I can see how were recognised for a place with this one captivating in presentation and wording well done Cheers Christineð???ð???
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2017
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Hi Kerry, Excellent Lanturne I can see how were recognised for a place with this one captivating in presentation and wording well done Cheers Christineð???ð???
Comment Written 04-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2017
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Thank you Christine, you found me-lol. It was nice talking to you today.
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Hi Kerry Yes it was nice to chat I will try to be more involved and look forward to mire of your work Cheers Christine😃👍
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Cheers, Christine
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is well written you have been very descriptive and the picture finishes it off so well adding to the feeling of the poem good luck regards Jill
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2017
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Yes this is well written you have been very descriptive and the picture finishes it off so well adding to the feeling of the poem good luck regards Jill
Comment Written 23-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2017
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Thank so much for your wonderful review and for adding me to your fan list.
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my pleasure i will do my best promise and thank you to jill
Comment from cumulus365
Wow, this is so succinct. I think those pediphiles should read this so they would go seek for help to save those helpless children. The lanturne structure is met with the syllables required for each line. Your artistic creativity captures the meaning of the feeling of having an evil mind. So simple wordings but deep in the void. For a soul that entertains evil mind who can still say this means that the soul can still recognize good from bad then the soul can be saved. Best wishes in the entry.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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Wow, this is so succinct. I think those pediphiles should read this so they would go seek for help to save those helpless children. The lanturne structure is met with the syllables required for each line. Your artistic creativity captures the meaning of the feeling of having an evil mind. So simple wordings but deep in the void. For a soul that entertains evil mind who can still say this means that the soul can still recognize good from bad then the soul can be saved. Best wishes in the entry.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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You are right about that- saving the children, horrible people in this world. I am grateful for your review and taking time to read it.
Thank you - Kerry
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem gives a succinct description of depression. The artwork reflects the darkness within.
Good luck and keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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This poem gives a succinct description of depression. The artwork reflects the darkness within.
Good luck and keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 23-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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Thank you so much for your kind words and review; it is much appreciated.
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Any time.
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Comment from chcbeck
A great example of the lanturne poetry contest. Fitting prompt perfectly. The image chosen and words really send a chill through you as you read so powerful.Thank you for sharing and good luck.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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A great example of the lanturne poetry contest. Fitting prompt perfectly. The image chosen and words really send a chill through you as you read so powerful.Thank you for sharing and good luck.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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Thank you for your wonderful review; it is much appreciated.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Mind is in darkness within, and it engulfs his soul, he seeks for help to help save his soul, the state is beyond control, a precarious state, this Lanturne speaks of the same well, I can relate to the status.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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Mind is in darkness within, and it engulfs his soul, he seeks for help to help save his soul, the state is beyond control, a precarious state, this Lanturne speaks of the same well, I can relate to the status.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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Well thank you very much for some very well put words. I do appreciate you taking the time to read and review this.
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi friend, i am sorry unless one suffers from acute depression, one would not see so much dark inside oneself. It Would be sad if this applies to you.
No one wants to be in the dark specially in black darkness. Do something, get involved and stay safe.
Danny Jock
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017
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Hi friend, i am sorry unless one suffers from acute depression, one would not see so much dark inside oneself. It Would be sad if this applies to you.
No one wants to be in the dark specially in black darkness. Do something, get involved and stay safe.
Danny Jock
Comment Written 21-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017
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Thank you so much Danny Jock. Everyone I suppose has a bit of darkness, fortunately, I am not the sufferer in this write. I was trying something different, my first poem of darkness. I have seen my share in my day of people who truly go through this. Thank you again for your kind words. Kerry
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Beautifully bleak you do not need help embrace the darkness I always have you will find it frees you in more ways than you ever thought possible excellent poem much enjoyed kind regards Meia x
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017
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Beautifully bleak you do not need help embrace the darkness I always have you will find it frees you in more ways than you ever thought possible excellent poem much enjoyed kind regards Meia x
Comment Written 21-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017
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Thank yo so much Meia, that was very sweet. x
Comment from Pantygynt
An odd subject for this form if i may say so. You had better trim the wick and light it but then the subject would no longer apply. you have the correct syllable count and a good shape as well not always easy to achieve.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017
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An odd subject for this form if i may say so. You had better trim the wick and light it but then the subject would no longer apply. you have the correct syllable count and a good shape as well not always easy to achieve.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my friend.
Comment from Bill O'Bier
What a ghoulish poem you've dreamed up. I've always had a wild imagination, so I feel that dark fantasy and horror are in my blood. Thanks for an entertaining piece.
Bill~
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2017
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What a ghoulish poem you've dreamed up. I've always had a wild imagination, so I feel that dark fantasy and horror are in my blood. Thanks for an entertaining piece.
Bill~
Comment Written 20-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2017
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Thank you so much Bill, I always loved horror, but this was my first stab at it.
