2017 JAPANESE POETRY
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "haiku 13 (obscured by gray clouds)"A collection of Japanese poetry
16 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for your tribute to Luna and her son with this ensemble. The picture you selected echoes the "gray clouds" and your alliteration of "l's" intensifies the message. A lovely salute- Joan
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2017
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Thank you for your tribute to Luna and her son with this ensemble. The picture you selected echoes the "gray clouds" and your alliteration of "l's" intensifies the message. A lovely salute- Joan
Comment Written 09-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2017
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thank you for the excellent review and helpful feedback :) my friend
namaste
Comment from l.raven
HI Gypsy, I am in tears ....I didn't even know...I don't even know what to say...I hate when we lose a part of our family...may she rest in peace...and now she is with her beloved son...thank you for letting us know...love ya Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2017
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HI Gypsy, I am in tears ....I didn't even know...I don't even know what to say...I hate when we lose a part of our family...may she rest in peace...and now she is with her beloved son...thank you for letting us know...love ya Linda xxoo
Comment Written 09-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2017
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thank you for the excellent review and helpful feedback :) my friend sweetie pie. luv ya
namaste
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your so welcome sweet lady...always...xxoo love
Comment from Lu Saluna
This is lovely. I really enjoyed her poetry, a lot. I found it enchanting and whimsical and it took me to worlds that only existing in our imaginations.
I enjoyed her fun spirit.
this is really nice, it is sad but very kind and thoughtful.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2017
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This is lovely. I really enjoyed her poetry, a lot. I found it enchanting and whimsical and it took me to worlds that only existing in our imaginations.
I enjoyed her fun spirit.
this is really nice, it is sad but very kind and thoughtful.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2017
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Thank you!
Gypsy haijin sensei
Fanstory haiku teacher
Member of the Haiku Society of America
°°°»°«°°°a new haiku class every month°°°»°«°°°
Comment from Douglas Paul
This is a good haiku and a great tribute to Luna. You captured the suddenness of death, especially when it was not expected. Well done, my friend
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2017
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This is a good haiku and a great tribute to Luna. You captured the suddenness of death, especially when it was not expected. Well done, my friend
Comment Written 08-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2017
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Thank you, Douglas. It is a huge loss and I will miss her. I didn't know her that well but we were becoming close friends. She friend me on facebook and we exchanged friendly communication in fanstory. She was a great lady, talented poet, and kind person. May God keep her and Mickey together in heaven and bring both peace.
Gypsy
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
A lovely haiku. We have lost yet another great poet, sadly too soon and quite unexpectedly. Thank you for sharing this in her honor, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2017
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A lovely haiku. We have lost yet another great poet, sadly too soon and quite unexpectedly. Thank you for sharing this in her honor, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 07-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2017
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I am deeply grateful for your review and kind words.
Gypsy haijin sensei
Fanstory Haiku Teacher
Member of the Haiku Society of America
I teach a new class every month
This month I'm teaching tanka
Comment from sandy montgomery
I didn't know she passed away. I too hope she rests in peace with her son. She was very kind. This was a lovely memorial to her. Thank you for sharing this.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2017
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I didn't know she passed away. I too hope she rests in peace with her son. She was very kind. This was a lovely memorial to her. Thank you for sharing this.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words sweetie sweetie pie.
Gypsy haijin sensei
Fanstory Haiku Teacher
Member of the Haiku Society of America
I teach a new class every month
This month I'm teaching tanka
Comment from judiverse
Sometimes those dark colors say exactly what we mean them to. You express such a profound thought about the uncertainty of life. One can indeed be here today and gone tomorrow. All we can do is appreciate the precious moments that we have. Reference to the clouds works well in this. Beautifully presented. judi
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2017
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Sometimes those dark colors say exactly what we mean them to. You express such a profound thought about the uncertainty of life. One can indeed be here today and gone tomorrow. All we can do is appreciate the precious moments that we have. Reference to the clouds works well in this. Beautifully presented. judi
Comment Written 07-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2017
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I am deeply grateful for your review and kind words.
Gypsy haijin sensei
Fanstory Haiku Teacher
Member of the Haiku Society of America
I teach a new class every month
This month I'm teaching tanka
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You're welcome. Have an excellent, productive day. judi
Comment from Sasha
This is a beautiful tribute to a lovely lady that will be missed dearly. At least she is now with her dear son. Beautiful haiku with two perfectly connected sentences and the 'ah ha' moment brought tears to my eyes.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2017
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This is a beautiful tribute to a lovely lady that will be missed dearly. At least she is now with her dear son. Beautiful haiku with two perfectly connected sentences and the 'ah ha' moment brought tears to my eyes.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2017
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I am deeply grateful for your review and kind words.
Gypsy haijin sensei
Fanstory Haiku Teacher
Member of the Haiku Society of America
I teach a new class every month
This month I'm teaching tanka
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
I am very sad about Jeni's passing. Her poetry was always thought provoking and very poignant. I had to face some more medical issues that have cost me some valuable time with reviewing.
Your poem Gypsy concerning Luna is so very poignant. You my friend are so very right with your second line: *here today~~gone tomorrow*! Enjoy this day my friend,,,,,,,,Jim
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2017
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I am very sad about Jeni's passing. Her poetry was always thought provoking and very poignant. I had to face some more medical issues that have cost me some valuable time with reviewing.
Your poem Gypsy concerning Luna is so very poignant. You my friend are so very right with your second line: *here today~~gone tomorrow*! Enjoy this day my friend,,,,,,,,Jim
Comment Written 07-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2017
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Thank you very much my friend.
Gypsy haijin sensei
Fanstory Haiku Teacher
Member of the Haiku Society of America
I teach a new class every month
This month I'm teaching tanka
Comment from winnona
A well-written poem. I did not know she had passed away. The heartfelt words flowed well line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2017
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A well-written poem. I did not know she had passed away. The heartfelt words flowed well line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2017
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I am deeply grateful for your review and kind words.
Gypsy haijin sensei
Fanstory Haiku Teacher
Member of the Haiku Society of America
I teach a new class every month
This month I'm teaching tanka