Comment from winnona

Excellent

A well-written contest entry. Although daffodils are usually early Spring flowers rather than Winter ones. Your words flowed well together and combined easily forming the message of the poem for the reader.

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2017

Thanks for the critique zanya

Comment from Sixty70

Excellent

Nice reminder that some flowers bloom with the slightest provocation. While still winter, daffodils can be covered in ice and snow. I love the use of the word 'pirouette'. Daffodils look like dancers in the winter.

Best to you in the contest.

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2017

Thanks for such an encouraging review zanya

Comment from Marykelly

Excellent

The image of the flower dancing while the background of winter fades away is visual and effective. The contrast of winter leaving makes spring's arrival even more noticeable.

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2017

Thanks for the critique zanya