2017 JAPANESE POETRY
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "humor 5/7/5 (Bubba and Luanne)"A collection of Japanese poetry
13 total reviews
Comment from michaelcahill
Surprise! I see ya found a couple snapshots of my kin....
I sure miss 'em. This is hilarious and that is RARE around these parts. I had a six left and this is where I'm leaving it. I'm still alive and all is well. I'm just a terrible fan. HAAAAAHAHAHA! Irish Hugs, mikey
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2017
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Surprise! I see ya found a couple snapshots of my kin....
I sure miss 'em. This is hilarious and that is RARE around these parts. I had a six left and this is where I'm leaving it. I'm still alive and all is well. I'm just a terrible fan. HAAAAAHAHAHA! Irish Hugs, mikey
Comment Written 04-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2017
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Wow, thank you very much, Michael, it sure is awful good to see you 'round these here parts. I appreasurate all them purdy six stars a whole lot! Bless you and them kin a' your'un.
Comment from BOO ghost
I saw this beauty earlier in some kind of contest. I had no clue because of blind entry but I voted for this one. What a coincidence. Brought humor to my blue eyes. I am a redneck that lives in the heart of Dixie... you tickled my funny bone well! If you got any lacerations ring worms will infect you because of the mud that never stopped BOO. A mud bath is good for the skin, right? Aha, is very funny picture.
BOO!
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017
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I saw this beauty earlier in some kind of contest. I had no clue because of blind entry but I voted for this one. What a coincidence. Brought humor to my blue eyes. I am a redneck that lives in the heart of Dixie... you tickled my funny bone well! If you got any lacerations ring worms will infect you because of the mud that never stopped BOO. A mud bath is good for the skin, right? Aha, is very funny picture.
BOO!
Comment Written 04-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017
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Thank you, honey, your reviews always make me happy. :) thank you for the lovely six and good advice. I didn't know about the ringworm thing.... eeaaakkkk!
gypsy hugs
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Well, one time was wading in a lake. A stick from the bottom had mud on it. The stick stuck my leg and injured me. I got a ringworm where the mud got into the wound. You should be fine unless you get an open wound.
Comment from Joan E.
I'm still trying to catch up and I'm almost there--at least for the moment. Thanks for making me smile with your 5-7-5 and the reinforcing pictures. I enjoyed your use of alliteration as well. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017
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I'm still trying to catch up and I'm almost there--at least for the moment. Thanks for making me smile with your 5-7-5 and the reinforcing pictures. I enjoyed your use of alliteration as well. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 04-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017
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you are welcome :) thank you for reading, my friend
Comment from Aiona
This poem makes me wanna go swimming! It also made me giggle, and it fits the five-seven-five format required of the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017
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This poem makes me wanna go swimming! It also made me giggle, and it fits the five-seven-five format required of the contest.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017
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thank you very much, my friend, take care,
gypsy
Comment from winnona
A well-written contest entry. This shows creativity and imagination. I think you have completed the challenge of the contest well. The artwork completed the piece. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017
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A well-written contest entry. This shows creativity and imagination. I think you have completed the challenge of the contest well. The artwork completed the piece. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017
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thank you very much, my friend, take care,
gypsy
Comment from Lu Saluna
I like this. It is quite funny and I am sure these rednecks are going to make one hell of a belly flop when they land in those big ass mud puddles.
They look like they are having fun. I think you will do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017
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I like this. It is quite funny and I am sure these rednecks are going to make one hell of a belly flop when they land in those big ass mud puddles.
They look like they are having fun. I think you will do well in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017
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hahaha ... yeah, I am sure they will :) thank you, honey
big gypsy hugs
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 fun poem. As I understand the so-called rednecks are straight forward and down to earth people and love to have fun.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2017
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A very well-written 5-7-5 fun poem. As I understand the so-called rednecks are straight forward and down to earth people and love to have fun.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2017
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Hello, Sandra, you are right, redneck are like that. Thank you for reading.
Comment from Rhonni
This is hilarious and with the photo to go along with the poem, it is very entertaining! You used humor and it's a fun and silly piece that gives the reader a good laugh. Well done and good luck!
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2017
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This is hilarious and with the photo to go along with the poem, it is very entertaining! You used humor and it's a fun and silly piece that gives the reader a good laugh. Well done and good luck!
Comment Written 03-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words.
Comment from Mustang Patty
LOL! Did the new pool arrive after Junior went four-wheeling in the back yard? You did indeed make me laugh with your 5-7-5. Great job.
Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2017
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LOL! Did the new pool arrive after Junior went four-wheeling in the back yard? You did indeed make me laugh with your 5-7-5. Great job.
Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 03-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words.
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
Good job with this humorous 5-7-5 piece. Well worked out within the format and brought a smile to my face so job done.
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2017
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Hi there,
Good job with this humorous 5-7-5 piece. Well worked out within the format and brought a smile to my face so job done.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 03-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2017
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Thank you, G man, you are very kind.