Daughter
An Angel is Born9 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Wow. This is such a sweet & profound poem. Good job on the style of it. Your few words are strong & flow nicely, too. Your picture is amazing. Best wishes in the contest. Jan
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2017
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Wow. This is such a sweet & profound poem. Good job on the style of it. Your few words are strong & flow nicely, too. Your picture is amazing. Best wishes in the contest. Jan
Comment Written 26-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2017
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Thank you so much, that was a lovely review. I appreciate you taking time to read it.
Comment from heyjude
Kerry, a very nice ode that is 5 7 5 syllables. God does create our little angels. Spot on with syllable count because I'm supposing the word blessed here is divided into two syllables. Good luck in this contest
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2017
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Kerry, a very nice ode that is 5 7 5 syllables. God does create our little angels. Spot on with syllable count because I'm supposing the word blessed here is divided into two syllables. Good luck in this contest
Comment Written 25-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2017
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Thank you for such a pleasant review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 Ode for a daughter to be. A girl in the house is a blessing that makes up for the mischievious boys.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2017
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A very well-written 5-7-5 Ode for a daughter to be. A girl in the house is a blessing that makes up for the mischievious boys.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2017
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Thank You for your review Sandra. Fortunately I was blessed with 2 girls. I am only now experiencing the boys,
I have a step son and his baby boy I take care of.
Comment from TheWriteTeach
This is a stellar entry for the contest. You carefully chose your words to provide the maximum meaning of this poem. The words paint a vivid picture in my mind's eye. Love the picture - it correlates well with your words. Excellent job with this. Good luck in the contest. This will be a contender, for sure.
Suzanne
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2017
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This is a stellar entry for the contest. You carefully chose your words to provide the maximum meaning of this poem. The words paint a vivid picture in my mind's eye. Love the picture - it correlates well with your words. Excellent job with this. Good luck in the contest. This will be a contender, for sure.
Suzanne
Comment Written 25-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2017
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Thank you so much for such a wonderful review, I appreciate it greatly.
I Thank you for the acknowledgement of my chosen words.
Comment from winnona
A well-written contest entry. The artwork completed the entry very well. I think you have completed the challenge of the contest. The well-chosen words flowed well and combined easily.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2017
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A well-written contest entry. The artwork completed the entry very well. I think you have completed the challenge of the contest. The well-chosen words flowed well and combined easily.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2017
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Thank you for your wonderful review, I appreciated it greatly.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful 5-7-5 Ode poem you have penned about the precious little one, God and delicate angel! Great wording and love the picture! Best wishes in the prompt! Teri
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2017
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This is a very beautiful 5-7-5 Ode poem you have penned about the precious little one, God and delicate angel! Great wording and love the picture! Best wishes in the prompt! Teri
Comment Written 24-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2017
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Thank you Teri for your kind words. I greatly appreciate you taking
the time to read it.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
I liked this is it is a beautiful way to describe the blessings of a daughter you have done well I loved the photo good luck in the contest regards Jill
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2017
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I liked this is it is a beautiful way to describe the blessings of a daughter you have done well I loved the photo good luck in the contest regards Jill
Comment Written 24-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2017
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Thank you Jill, I appreciate you taking the time to to read and review my poem.
Comment from marybell1
A lovely story of a new birth. The photo was just beautiful, and your 5-7-5 ode was spot on. That sort of technology was not available when I was expecting my children.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2017
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A lovely story of a new birth. The photo was just beautiful, and your 5-7-5 ode was spot on. That sort of technology was not available when I was expecting my children.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2017
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Aww! Thank you marybell. I certainly appreciate you taking the time to read and review this.
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
Comment from Dean Kuch
A-w-w-w...
There's nothing more special than the love a mother has for her children.
Sure, fathers love their kids too, of course. But let's face it, for the most part men are not as skilled in the ways of nurturing as mothers are.
This is a lovely node, and you've even managed to work a little rhyming into the mix.
I hope you do well in the contest.
I'll be watching for this one.
Good luck, Kerry!
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2017
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A-w-w-w...
There's nothing more special than the love a mother has for her children.
Sure, fathers love their kids too, of course. But let's face it, for the most part men are not as skilled in the ways of nurturing as mothers are.
This is a lovely node, and you've even managed to work a little rhyming into the mix.
I hope you do well in the contest.
I'll be watching for this one.
Good luck, Kerry!
Comment Written 23-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2017
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Thank you Dean, yeah, I just cant help the rhyme sometimes. I thought maybe it wasn't good , cause I had no responses
whatsoever. Well thank you for taking the time out to read it, I appreciate that. I guess we'll see huh?
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That's because you're relatively new and you've promoted this to just twenty cents.
In addition, you've entered this in a blind contest. Your fans are not notified of your posts in blind contests, and you must maintain complete anonymity or you could be disqualified.
FanStory is a rewards based system, and readers seek out the highest paying posts so that they can promote their own work.
I'm not saying that's right--it isn't.
But, that's just the way it works here.
But, if you want lots of reviews for a blind post, you'll have to pump it up to around .57 cents, at least.
As for me, if I'm your fan or you are mine, I could care less how much you're paying me to read what you've written.
Good luck, Kerry...
~Dean
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Thank you, I had no idea. I am a big fan of yours. I'm happy to have you in my tiny little fan club. Hey I'm just getting warmed up to put out a big wow haha
