House of dreams
Just a poem 8 /6 /8 /645 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Te artwork shows the perfect house to live these fantasies. I've always wanted to ride Pegasus or a dragon. It seems a place you never would want to return home from.
Keep writing.
dragonpoet
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Te artwork shows the perfect house to live these fantasies. I've always wanted to ride Pegasus or a dragon. It seems a place you never would want to return home from.
Keep writing.
dragonpoet
Comment Written 04-Jun-2017
Comment from ~Dovey
Hi Jeni,
I wonder, was it you who prompted me to chose the ballad as our form for Poetry Potlatch today? I'm not sure, I think I read this one when you first passed, but I didn't leave a review, as you were already gone. Well, today I give you six stars for Mother's Day. This poem and your love for your son are the epitome of all that day truly means. Today is our time to remember you and give back some of that love.
Happy Mother's Day, Luna!!
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Hi Jeni,
I wonder, was it you who prompted me to chose the ballad as our form for Poetry Potlatch today? I'm not sure, I think I read this one when you first passed, but I didn't leave a review, as you were already gone. Well, today I give you six stars for Mother's Day. This poem and your love for your son are the epitome of all that day truly means. Today is our time to remember you and give back some of that love.
Happy Mother's Day, Luna!!
Comment Written 13-May-2017
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, Sister Luna,
How are you, honey? This beautiful poem with the lovely iambic meter and soft cadence remind me of fairy tales and mysterious dream-like times.
I hope you are feeling better. Sending you all my love, sweetie pie.
Gypsy
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Hello, Sister Luna,
How are you, honey? This beautiful poem with the lovely iambic meter and soft cadence remind me of fairy tales and mysterious dream-like times.
I hope you are feeling better. Sending you all my love, sweetie pie.
Gypsy
Comment Written 22-Feb-2017
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A dreamy write of fantastical journeys on mythical horses and moon lit nights, your poem took me to another place and away from reality for a moment, love Dolly x
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A dreamy write of fantastical journeys on mythical horses and moon lit nights, your poem took me to another place and away from reality for a moment, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Feb-2017
Comment from rjuselius
this is a beautiful piece of fantasy poetry dear jeni! i love how you have incorporated your muse in the poem. nice one my friend!
thank you for sharing!
blessings!
rebekka x
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this is a beautiful piece of fantasy poetry dear jeni! i love how you have incorporated your muse in the poem. nice one my friend!
thank you for sharing!
blessings!
rebekka x
Comment Written 21-Feb-2017
Comment from Joan E.
I enjoyed your regular, rhymed quatrains and reinforcing artwork selection. Here's to more "captivating nights"! Cheers- Joan
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I enjoyed your regular, rhymed quatrains and reinforcing artwork selection. Here's to more "captivating nights"! Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 20-Feb-2017
Comment from crybry67
Sounds like a great adventure. I must admit, I would love to soar on a winged horse. Great rhyme and meter. Blessings... Christy
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Sounds like a great adventure. I must admit, I would love to soar on a winged horse. Great rhyme and meter. Blessings... Christy
Comment Written 20-Feb-2017
Comment from Unspoken94
Jeni, this is the reason I wanted to be your
fan. This is an excellent write and I'm going
to change my score. I started this review at
a five but it is really a six. -bill
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Jeni, this is the reason I wanted to be your
fan. This is an excellent write and I'm going
to change my score. I started this review at
a five but it is really a six. -bill
Comment Written 20-Feb-2017
Comment from mermaids
I would love a book of your poem. You have a customer if you publish a book. There is a light and fantasy feel to your words. I especially like the line " space flowers colored green". It is a pleasant image that is clear and adds to the strength of the poem.
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I would love a book of your poem. You have a customer if you publish a book. There is a light and fantasy feel to your words. I especially like the line " space flowers colored green". It is a pleasant image that is clear and adds to the strength of the poem.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2017
Comment from jusylee72
wonderful fantasy run away and play with the stars poem. I truly enjoy the energy in it. It is strong and vivid and makes me want to join in the play. Thank you for a delightful moment.
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wonderful fantasy run away and play with the stars poem. I truly enjoy the energy in it. It is strong and vivid and makes me want to join in the play. Thank you for a delightful moment.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2017
