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Haiku(cicadas humming)

Haiku -insects

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Comment from azwildrosa
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Oh how I love these little. My favorite. When I was a child we'd find them all over the place. Today I find them whole and dead. Lol I bring them home to put in my house plants to freak my kids out. This is a great entry for this prompt. Congratulations to your win!

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2017


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
    Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from mermaids
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Excellent haiku about these insects which are quite loud. Your words capture the feel and sound of these insects which come out, I believe at several year intervals.
Excellent haiku form.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2017


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
    Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from robyn corum
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'winged music maestros' -- I may have to argue with that a bit...have you HEARD them? hahahaha! They are actually just loud hummers. hahaha! But thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2017


reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
    Thanks for the critique zanya
Comment from strivinginsc
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You followed the rules and format. The photo gave both visual and a reminder of the sound. It is good reminder of the musical of a summer eve, as the insects perform.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2017


reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
    Thanks for reading and the critique zanya
reply by strivinginsc on 16-Feb-2017
    Thanks
Comment from winnona
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a well-written contest entry, You have completed the challenge of the contest well. Cicadas are very interesting insect and I think you captured them well in this entry.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2017


reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
    Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello, my friend

Nice haiku, it is succinct and it has a clear message. The satori is okay. The presentation is beautiful. Overall this is a great haiku. Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 15-Feb-2017


reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
    Thanks for this vote of confidence. zanya
Comment from Janet Foor
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We went throught the 17 -year cycle of the cicadas a few years ago. Theie humming was
deafening.
I liked your insect haiku. Good picture and excellent satori line. Well done

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2017


reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
    Thanks for this review zanya
Comment from June Sargent
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What a delightful image you have painted in this haiku. Little maestros serenading us on a hot summer day. Should do well in the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2017


reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
    Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Irish Rain
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This reminds me of how much I love all the sounds of summer. The bugs, birds, frogs...and the children running and playing. A wonderful haiku, blessings...

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2017


reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
    Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Bobbi22
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You know it's summer when you hear those cicadas buzzing. Your haiku paints a clear picture (and sound) of the cicadas in the summer. Very well written. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2017


reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
    Thanks for reading zanya