Why Does Love Have To Be So Sad?
Free verse49 total reviews
Comment from Dawn Munro
Wow. This is incredible. Just how incredible, you have no idea, my friend, but I will mot definitely give this form my attention after reading this stunning poem. Scary, powerful and most compelling - those first two lines drew me in completely!
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Wow. This is incredible. Just how incredible, you have no idea, my friend, but I will mot definitely give this form my attention after reading this stunning poem. Scary, powerful and most compelling - those first two lines drew me in completely!
Comment Written 13-Feb-2017
Comment from William Ross
Very well done on the crown cinquain,love really doesn't have to be so sad but often is, great job on this, thanks for the share and have a wonderful day
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Very well done on the crown cinquain,love really doesn't have to be so sad but often is, great job on this, thanks for the share and have a wonderful day
Comment Written 13-Feb-2017
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
When I read the "milk and honey" line I had a feeling this would turn. That and the lovely tone of the poem - almost too sweet. Great job - as I read I looked forward to the next line. A wonderfully crafted poem
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When I read the "milk and honey" line I had a feeling this would turn. That and the lovely tone of the poem - almost too sweet. Great job - as I read I looked forward to the next line. A wonderfully crafted poem
Comment Written 13-Feb-2017
Comment from tfawcus
A macabre act of revenge! It seems that the old saying "Hell hath no fury like a woman spurred" applies here!
I found your background notes on the form interesting.
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A macabre act of revenge! It seems that the old saying "Hell hath no fury like a woman spurred" applies here!
I found your background notes on the form interesting.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2017
Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting and good poem you have penned. I did not know there was a crowned cinquain. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Blessings, Teri
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This is a very interesting and good poem you have penned. I did not know there was a crowned cinquain. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 13-Feb-2017
Comment from l.raven
Hi Jeni, true love to me...is when you don't have a reason to walk away...it's so sad that some in a relationships today have to cheat...today the words I love you have lost what they truly mean...sigh...very well written...and I bet the building in this picture could tell some true stories...love Linda xxoo
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Hi Jeni, true love to me...is when you don't have a reason to walk away...it's so sad that some in a relationships today have to cheat...today the words I love you have lost what they truly mean...sigh...very well written...and I bet the building in this picture could tell some true stories...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 13-Feb-2017
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written crown of Cinquains. Not all love relationships work out well as it was planned.
Visions
of buttercups
fill your mind ~ so lovely.
Take your bath of milk and honey.
Sweet as sugar cane. (I might be wrong but I don't think this line should be here. The rest of the poem works perfectly)
How nice.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2017
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A very well-written crown of Cinquains. Not all love relationships work out well as it was planned.
Visions
of buttercups
fill your mind ~ so lovely.
Take your bath of milk and honey.
Sweet as sugar cane. (I might be wrong but I don't think this line should be here. The rest of the poem works perfectly)
How nice.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2017
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Thanks for the catch, Sandra. I made the channel. ❤️ ❤️
Comment from Badger_29
I loved your poem, an interesting and ironic journey, very colorful images, good flow and strong words. Any reader can not help but identify with, and recall similar circunstances. Ende on a very thoughtful and interesting not, I had to read 3 times to digest, and the cliches of the last few lines are ringing in my head.
I also found the information on cinquains that you provided to be fascinating and a joy to lean about. I liked the butterfly; I a going to book-case this so that I too can experiment. What the heck, by now you know that i have aan addictive personality, and there are some slots open now that I'm in recovery!
Blessings,
Brother Badger~
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I loved your poem, an interesting and ironic journey, very colorful images, good flow and strong words. Any reader can not help but identify with, and recall similar circunstances. Ende on a very thoughtful and interesting not, I had to read 3 times to digest, and the cliches of the last few lines are ringing in my head.
I also found the information on cinquains that you provided to be fascinating and a joy to lean about. I liked the butterfly; I a going to book-case this so that I too can experiment. What the heck, by now you know that i have aan addictive personality, and there are some slots open now that I'm in recovery!
Blessings,
Brother Badger~
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Comment Written 13-Feb-2017
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Well Jeni, Love is not sad LOL, but reading your free verse love is sad when it is of this kind - deceit, jealousy and murder. No plesure in that kind of love. No trust! LOL. Well written free verse - Warm regards Dorothy x
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Well Jeni, Love is not sad LOL, but reading your free verse love is sad when it is of this kind - deceit, jealousy and murder. No plesure in that kind of love. No trust! LOL. Well written free verse - Warm regards Dorothy x
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Comment Written 13-Feb-2017
