Homegrown Flowers
Tanka 5/7/5/7/749 total reviews
Comment from Mastery
Hi, Moonchild. Until now, I had no idea that rasmine was into the art side of things. I just recently saw some of her writing. Small world.
Anyway, how generous of you to invite people to pick your flowers.
"scented love, hope, peace
souls seeking harmony ~"
Wonderful images. Blessings, my friend Bob
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Hi, Moonchild. Until now, I had no idea that rasmine was into the art side of things. I just recently saw some of her writing. Small world.
Anyway, how generous of you to invite people to pick your flowers.
"scented love, hope, peace
souls seeking harmony ~"
Wonderful images. Blessings, my friend Bob
Comment Written 12-Feb-2017
Comment from mermaids
I like the line "scented love, hope, peace". The image of the flowers as these emotions adds to the strength of your poem. There is a happy feeling in your poem.
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I like the line "scented love, hope, peace". The image of the flowers as these emotions adds to the strength of your poem. There is a happy feeling in your poem.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2017
Comment from Gert sherwood
Smiles Luna,
the way I read your tanka poem you pickled the most beautiful array of flowers from your home grown garden placed them in a fancy vase to someone special.
Gert
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Smiles Luna,
the way I read your tanka poem you pickled the most beautiful array of flowers from your home grown garden placed them in a fancy vase to someone special.
Gert
Comment Written 12-Feb-2017
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
This reminds me of the day I came home to find my flower garden in the front of my house had been ravaged. I was upset till I found someone thought they were good enough for a bouquet to put on a casket. I felt honored
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This reminds me of the day I came home to find my flower garden in the front of my house had been ravaged. I was upset till I found someone thought they were good enough for a bouquet to put on a casket. I felt honored
Comment Written 12-Feb-2017
Comment from nancyrabbrose
Another lovely tribute to Mickey. You chose a great illustration and your poetic words enhance the whole display. Your flowers that you paint with your words give life to all of us. Well done.
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Another lovely tribute to Mickey. You chose a great illustration and your poetic words enhance the whole display. Your flowers that you paint with your words give life to all of us. Well done.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2017
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
Absolutely beautiful Tanka poem, you have portrayed the the picture of flowers from bed to vase wonderfully well and such a lovely picture to compliment your words.
Thanks for sharing
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Absolutely beautiful Tanka poem, you have portrayed the the picture of flowers from bed to vase wonderfully well and such a lovely picture to compliment your words.
Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 12-Feb-2017
Comment from winnona
A well-written contest entry. Your words flowed well line to line combining and forming the message of the poem for the reader. I think you have completed the challenge of the contest well.
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A well-written contest entry. Your words flowed well line to line combining and forming the message of the poem for the reader. I think you have completed the challenge of the contest well.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2017
Comment from ProSongwriter
Hi Jeni,
I wouldn't know a Tanka from a mushroom. But I know I like this! The warmth and gentle message of your words is soothing and a pleasure to read. very well done, my friend!
wishing you everything good!
Alan
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Hi Jeni,
I wouldn't know a Tanka from a mushroom. But I know I like this! The warmth and gentle message of your words is soothing and a pleasure to read. very well done, my friend!
wishing you everything good!
Alan
Comment Written 12-Feb-2017
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
scented love, hope, peace
souls seeking harmony ~
Join~ pick some of our beauty
What a beautiful write for the comp, Luna, this is superb, i particularly liked the above lines, gave me tingles, you do that often with your work! well done love meia xx
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scented love, hope, peace
souls seeking harmony ~
Join~ pick some of our beauty
What a beautiful write for the comp, Luna, this is superb, i particularly liked the above lines, gave me tingles, you do that often with your work! well done love meia xx
Comment Written 12-Feb-2017
Comment from Zue65
You followed strictly the rules for writing a Tanka and you executed it well here. The message is spot on. I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing.
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You followed strictly the rules for writing a Tanka and you executed it well here. The message is spot on. I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2017
