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No Coincidences

Double Etheree

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Comment from dragonpoet
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This is a wonderful poem that states that everyone who effects your life is your soul mate because the touch and change your soul and who you are no matter how long you are together.


 Comment Written 16-Jul-2017

Comment from mmonaghan777
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This is a beautiful poem and it is true we are all touched by everyone we meet no matter where we go. I am sorry for your loss and wish you the best. The shape of the poem is unique and the picture completes it.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2017

Comment from Unspoken94
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Another fanstorian urged me to read your works. I am
not disappointed. The double etheree is beautifully crafted
and the message is so well thought out. No, there are
no coincidences. Yes, each person we meet does indeed have
an influence to our lives.
I hope you will permit me to become a fan.
Bill Stephenson.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2017

Comment from Bill Schott
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This double etheree, No Coincidences, does the tapered meter just right. The theme of enduring time that stays related to the first moment to the most current. Nice.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2017

Comment from Donya Quijote
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A very nice sentiment. A very good friend of mine whose words of wisdom I still carry with me would very much agree. There are no coincidences, everything we experience good and bad has a purpose and is by design. Good write...

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2017

Comment from valmay
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You have put together an encompassing Etheree which looks at the meaning of everyday life. How important it is in each moment. Thank you.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2017

Comment from RGstar
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Yes, chemistry is a big part of life, especially when it is positive. So many pieces of the puzzle need to click.

First impressions can be lucky, but best to go deep.
Best wishes,
Luna
RG

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2017

Comment from mermaids
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I find comfort in your line about every soul you meet has influence on you, something I never thought about. I enjoyed reading this poem, it has a spiritual feel and flow to your words. Excellent etheree form.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2017

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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I enjoyed reading your double etheree. Good job on its style. Your words flow nicely with a great message. The picture is perfect for your words. You give readers much to think about.

Good job & thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2017

Comment from ronnie k
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I took this message into my heart, the structure is so well fitting, it gave a powerful message the demand of attention, this gave me a read that called for a reading, thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2017