2017 JAPANESE POETRY
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "double haiku (magenta clouds)"A collection of Japanese poetry
13 total reviews
Comment from Gaye Hemsley
Both lovely Haiku whatever way you place the words. I got a lovely surprise when I heard the ocean and the gulls, very relaxing. Cheers Gaye
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2017
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Both lovely Haiku whatever way you place the words. I got a lovely surprise when I heard the ocean and the gulls, very relaxing. Cheers Gaye
Comment Written 10-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2017
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Thank you very much, my friend, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review.
Peace be with you,
Gypsy Blue Rose
Fanstory Haiku Teacher
Haiku Society of American member
Comment from cumulus365
Hi Gypsy, I like this creativity. The time of the day when the earth is tilting such that the rays get bent to get these exquisite coloring in the sky. The deep dark horizon bars the separation of sky, land, and water. Very warm, beautiful brief moment enough to capture in a painting as you have here as an artful piece.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2017
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Hi Gypsy, I like this creativity. The time of the day when the earth is tilting such that the rays get bent to get these exquisite coloring in the sky. The deep dark horizon bars the separation of sky, land, and water. Very warm, beautiful brief moment enough to capture in a painting as you have here as an artful piece.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2017
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thank you, my friend
Comment from l.raven
HI Gypsy. you are soooooo clever girl...I like the way you can read this both ways...and yes you do get a two for one special...beautiful Queen of Haiku...I love it...very nicely written...love ya you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
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HI Gypsy. you are soooooo clever girl...I like the way you can read this both ways...and yes you do get a two for one special...beautiful Queen of Haiku...I love it...very nicely written...love ya you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 07-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
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Hello, sweetie pie, how are you doing? Thank you for reading me. Luv ya.
Buddha blessings,
Gypsy Blue Rose
Haiku instructor
Member of the Haiku Society of America
a new haiku class every month....
Do you haiku? Check out the haiku club. It's a place for fun and learning.
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your so welcome Queen of Haiku...always...you are a sweetheart...love ya xxoo
Comment from Sasha
This is so lovely. I especially like that you can read it forward and backward. The sound of waves crashing onto the shore adds to the beautiful poem and illustration too.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
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This is so lovely. I especially like that you can read it forward and backward. The sound of waves crashing onto the shore adds to the beautiful poem and illustration too.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
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Hello, Sasha,
.........yeah, I was experimenting. it's fun to that sometimes.... try something new.... you know?
Comment from Chrissy710
Very visual Gypsy well done with an excellent couplet Haiku to compliment this splendid image .A clever post and maybe you will start a new Haiku trend Hmmmm. Cheers Christine
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
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Very visual Gypsy well done with an excellent couplet Haiku to compliment this splendid image .A clever post and maybe you will start a new Haiku trend Hmmmm. Cheers Christine
Comment Written 07-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
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Hello, my friend, :) Thank you for reading me.
Buddha blessings,
Gypsy Blue Rose
Haiku instructor
Member of the Haiku Society of America
a new haiku class every month....
Do you haiku? Check out the haiku club. It's a place for fun and learning.
Comment from Douglas Paul
ahhh - very nice. It really reads well both ways. I really like "reflections" Sky scenes are always more beautiful when you can see their reflection in the lake at the same time
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
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ahhh - very nice. It really reads well both ways. I really like "reflections" Sky scenes are always more beautiful when you can see their reflection in the lake at the same time
Comment Written 07-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
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Hello, my friend, :) Thank you for reading me. Yes, I love reflections on the water. There is something about big bodies of water that I find very appealing. I love the ocean and big lakes the best but creeks and rivers are cool too.
Buddha blessings,
Gypsy Blue Rose
Haiku instructor
Member of the Haiku Society of America
a new haiku class every month....
Do you haiku? Check out the haiku club. It's a place for fun and learning.
Comment from Mark Valentine
Rarely have I seen the optics of a poem used to such great effect. It's lovely to look at - and the words mirror the visual experience perfectly. Like your last one ("affinity") this one creates mood in the reader. Fantastic.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
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Rarely have I seen the optics of a poem used to such great effect. It's lovely to look at - and the words mirror the visual experience perfectly. Like your last one ("affinity") this one creates mood in the reader. Fantastic.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
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Hello, my friend, :) Thank you for reading me.
Buddha blessings,
Gypsy Blue Rose
Haiku instructor
Member of the Haiku Society of America
a new haiku class every month....
Do you haiku? Check out the haiku club. It's a place for fun and learning.
Comment from krys123
Hello, Gypsy;
-I like how you reverse the satori to be in the first line of the first haiku and in the third line of the second haiku. I think I got it right?
-Anyway I do like the presentation and the descriptive lines of very dramatically connected and dramatically expressed a definitive situation.
-The satori software that moment well for me a spontaneity of excitement and is relative to the conceptual and contextual themes.
-I think the pictures really well chosen and definitely gives you that magenta setting.
-I do thank you for sharing and take care and have a good one.
Alex
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
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Hello, Gypsy;
-I like how you reverse the satori to be in the first line of the first haiku and in the third line of the second haiku. I think I got it right?
-Anyway I do like the presentation and the descriptive lines of very dramatically connected and dramatically expressed a definitive situation.
-The satori software that moment well for me a spontaneity of excitement and is relative to the conceptual and contextual themes.
-I think the pictures really well chosen and definitely gives you that magenta setting.
-I do thank you for sharing and take care and have a good one.
Alex
Comment Written 07-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
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LoL yeah, you got it, Alex :)
Comment from Grasshopper2
Haikuist-Sensei,
Ooh! Ooh! Ooh! (Three Stooges?). Haikuist-Sensei shows Grasshopper a mirror haiku one not seen prior. This new concept is hippity-hop haiku. I luff it. The mirror form. Yours is wunnerful. Thank you, teach. I am forever in your school.
Grasshopper
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
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Haikuist-Sensei,
Ooh! Ooh! Ooh! (Three Stooges?). Haikuist-Sensei shows Grasshopper a mirror haiku one not seen prior. This new concept is hippity-hop haiku. I luff it. The mirror form. Yours is wunnerful. Thank you, teach. I am forever in your school.
Grasshopper
Comment Written 07-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
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LoL, the three stooges were annoying hahaha. I like '''hippity-hop haiku" sounds like the beginning of a haiku.
Hello, my friend, :) Thank you for reading me.
Buddha blessings,
Gypsy Blue Rose
Haiku instructor
Member of the Haiku Society of America
a new haiku class every month....
Do you haiku? Check out the haiku club. It's a place for fun and learning.
Comment from Lu Saluna
A haiku about my what I have been wishing for today. Spring!
This is very beautiful. "magenta clouds" such a beautiful colour, one of my favourites. Even better at "two for one special" awesome satori.
This would be a beautiful print for a wall hanging.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2017
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A haiku about my what I have been wishing for today. Spring!
This is very beautiful. "magenta clouds" such a beautiful colour, one of my favourites. Even better at "two for one special" awesome satori.
This would be a beautiful print for a wall hanging.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2017
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*joy sparks* your words make me happy :) thank you for your kind review.
Gypsy Blue Rose
Haiku Instructor
Haiku Society of America
Buddha Blessings
