Somewhere, Down The Road
A fight with cancer57 total reviews
Comment from Cedar
Hello Jay: It sounds like to me that you are a very strong and determined man. 20 years of fighting cancer takes a strong will to stay alive and beat this dreaded disease.
Congratulations my friend. I believe that we will leave this world when it's our time and it's clearly not your time. Take care of yourself...Bill
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Hello Jay: It sounds like to me that you are a very strong and determined man. 20 years of fighting cancer takes a strong will to stay alive and beat this dreaded disease.
Congratulations my friend. I believe that we will leave this world when it's our time and it's clearly not your time. Take care of yourself...Bill
Comment Written 15-Mar-2019
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Well I am glad you are still here to share your talent with us. Really well done, great rhyme and heart felt. Death is scary, even when we know what waits on the other side. My sis had cancer 11yrs ago and it going strong, much younger than her age says, I think you are too.
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Well I am glad you are still here to share your talent with us. Really well done, great rhyme and heart felt. Death is scary, even when we know what waits on the other side. My sis had cancer 11yrs ago and it going strong, much younger than her age says, I think you are too.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2019
Comment from geetha silvaratnam
First and foremost, congratulations to you in fighting that malicious cancer. I am sorry to hear about your wife. This poem is wonderfully written with such a good flow. The message is clear and impactful. Really inspiring, thank you for sharing.
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First and foremost, congratulations to you in fighting that malicious cancer. I am sorry to hear about your wife. This poem is wonderfully written with such a good flow. The message is clear and impactful. Really inspiring, thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2019
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Your poem denotes suffering so well. Your inner turmoil is quite evident and yet you are able to convey all this in a wonderful rhyming way. I salute you for the courage you have maintained, Your journey is a long one and wish you the best as you continue. Keep the faith. God Bless
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Your poem denotes suffering so well. Your inner turmoil is quite evident and yet you are able to convey all this in a wonderful rhyming way. I salute you for the courage you have maintained, Your journey is a long one and wish you the best as you continue. Keep the faith. God Bless
Comment Written 15-Mar-2019
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Jay,
Good for you, beating that dreaded disease! I am saddened to hear of your first wife's demise at the hand of the big "C." This is, as always, flawlessly written, with a lot of heart. Nothing here for me to suggest you consider improving upon. Thank you for sharing and stay well, my friend. Jan :-)
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Hi Jay,
Good for you, beating that dreaded disease! I am saddened to hear of your first wife's demise at the hand of the big "C." This is, as always, flawlessly written, with a lot of heart. Nothing here for me to suggest you consider improving upon. Thank you for sharing and stay well, my friend. Jan :-)
Comment Written 15-Mar-2019
Comment from Gail Denham
Oh my - I'm glad you beat cancer. And sorry for the loss of your wife. It's a horrible enemy that stalks us all. This is a heartfelt poem - very good. It does come with treachery. Thanks for being brave enough to share.
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Oh my - I'm glad you beat cancer. And sorry for the loss of your wife. It's a horrible enemy that stalks us all. This is a heartfelt poem - very good. It does come with treachery. Thanks for being brave enough to share.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2019
Comment from meeshu
this is a fine piece. it has a great cadence and pace. excellent language, verse and verbiage. such a unique way of personifying the disease to expose it. well done, a 6six6, Jaybird1......................meeshu
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this is a fine piece. it has a great cadence and pace. excellent language, verse and verbiage. such a unique way of personifying the disease to expose it. well done, a 6six6, Jaybird1......................meeshu
Comment Written 14-Mar-2019
Comment from RGstar
Loved that, loved the fact within that last line dear author...brought a little tear to eye..my mother passed in 2009 so any of triumph, especially from a fellow author, give me much pleasue...so happy...I hope for many more years for you and all family , including all who survives and kicks butt. Bravo.
My best wishes.
RGstar
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Loved that, loved the fact within that last line dear author...brought a little tear to eye..my mother passed in 2009 so any of triumph, especially from a fellow author, give me much pleasue...so happy...I hope for many more years for you and all family , including all who survives and kicks butt. Bravo.
My best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 14-Mar-2019
Comment from kiwijenny
Oh I'm so glad you beat the devil named cancer. My mother didn't my grand dad didn't neither did cousins aunties...grrrrrrr...but my spirit's cancer free...amen amen amen
Well penned full of heart poem
God bless
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Oh I'm so glad you beat the devil named cancer. My mother didn't my grand dad didn't neither did cousins aunties...grrrrrrr...but my spirit's cancer free...amen amen amen
Well penned full of heart poem
God bless
Comment Written 14-Mar-2019
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I'm sorry for your loss of your beloved wife. I am thrilled you beat the big C. Your poem paints a good picture of ho you feel and what has happened. Thank you for sharing. Jan
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I'm sorry for your loss of your beloved wife. I am thrilled you beat the big C. Your poem paints a good picture of ho you feel and what has happened. Thank you for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 14-Mar-2019
