Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 39 "Walk Around"Assorted poetry
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Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting 5-7-5 poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017
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This is a very interesting 5-7-5 poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 31-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Teri. Bill
Comment from frogbook
Hahaha. Another one worthy of a great laugh. Is that pic really meant to be that or did you just see that in the picture? Very funny and entertaining.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017
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Hahaha. Another one worthy of a great laugh. Is that pic really meant to be that or did you just see that in the picture? Very funny and entertaining.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017
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I saw the picture and it looked like a Godzilla sized hole. Thank you.
Comment from nomi338
If you are smart enough to figure which way he was going, you will go in the opposite direction just as fast as you possibly can. It is not wise or healthy to get any closer than necessary to the very real and deadly danger represented by a force this strong. No time for being curious, read about it in another country's newspaper.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017
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If you are smart enough to figure which way he was going, you will go in the opposite direction just as fast as you possibly can. It is not wise or healthy to get any closer than necessary to the very real and deadly danger represented by a force this strong. No time for being curious, read about it in another country's newspaper.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017
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Good advice.
Comment from prettybluebirds
Excellent. Great short poetry. There is really not too much a reviewer can say about these short-short poems. Looks and sounds good to me. Great job.
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Excellent. Great short poetry. There is really not too much a reviewer can say about these short-short poems. Looks and sounds good to me. Great job.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017
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Thank you, PBB, for the kind review. Bill
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Filmy stunt captured, there is a very nice visual imagery reflection in this 5-7-5 work, I enjoyed the read of this commendable work.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017
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Filmy stunt captured, there is a very nice visual imagery reflection in this 5-7-5 work, I enjoyed the read of this commendable work.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017
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Thank you, ALD, for the kind review. Bill
