Love for ever
A 10 word poem, for prompt.12 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Absolutely true. Dogs are the best. Your 10-word poem is great. We're the star of their show. I enjoyed reading it and wish you much luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017
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Absolutely true. Dogs are the best. Your 10-word poem is great. We're the star of their show. I enjoyed reading it and wish you much luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 30-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.
Comment from robyn corum
You are certainly right about this. If there's one thing we can count on forever, it's the loyalty of our dogs. Which is kind of humbling when you think about it. Good luck!
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2017
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You are certainly right about this. If there's one thing we can count on forever, it's the loyalty of our dogs. Which is kind of humbling when you think about it. Good luck!
Comment Written 30-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.
Comment from Alex Biasin
Nicely done.
A good choice of words that flowed well.
You managed to tell a tale in a very small number of words that evokes some emotions as well as ringing true.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2017
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Nicely done.
A good choice of words that flowed well.
You managed to tell a tale in a very small number of words that evokes some emotions as well as ringing true.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
People's love blooms and fades /dog's love never ever swayed=10
--good job with the word count :)
--lines don't connect well but it's not required
--close to rhyme but not required
Good job, my friend
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2017
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People's love blooms and fades /dog's love never ever swayed=10
--good job with the word count :)
--lines don't connect well but it's not required
--close to rhyme but not required
Good job, my friend
Comment Written 30-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.
Comment from winnona
A well- written contest entry. I think you completed the challenge of the contest very well.Your beautiful artwork and background color completed the piece well. Good luck.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2017
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A well- written contest entry. I think you completed the challenge of the contest very well.Your beautiful artwork and background color completed the piece well. Good luck.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, anonymous. Have a great week.
Comment from Bobbi22
Beautiful poem describing the long-lasting love you receive from your dog. So much said in just ten words. Good use of internal rhyme. Very well written. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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Beautiful poem describing the long-lasting love you receive from your dog. So much said in just ten words. Good use of internal rhyme. Very well written. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday.
Comment from papa55mike
I love this well written entry in this contest. I've read several of these today and I really like this one, it's a great play on words.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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I love this well written entry in this contest. I've read several of these today and I really like this one, it's a great play on words.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 29-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday.
Comment from fimarie78
It has been interesting to read the many different takes on this prompt. Only a fellow animal lover will understand. The love of an animal is unconditional and they will be there in good times and bad, unlike people.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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It has been interesting to read the many different takes on this prompt. Only a fellow animal lover will understand. The love of an animal is unconditional and they will be there in good times and bad, unlike people.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday.
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi friend, however beautiful these lines are and they are beautiful, no doubt about it, they make me ashame to be a man. It never occurred to that somehow dogs are better, because once they love their love lasts .it is different with us, isn't?
Danny Jock
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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Hi friend, however beautiful these lines are and they are beautiful, no doubt about it, they make me ashame to be a man. It never occurred to that somehow dogs are better, because once they love their love lasts .it is different with us, isn't?
Danny Jock
Comment Written 29-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday.
Comment from Bill Schott
This ten-word poem, Love For Ever, compares us to our canine friends in the area of love. We are more choosy than dogs. They love us when no one else will. We love them more than people, sometimes.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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This ten-word poem, Love For Ever, compares us to our canine friends in the area of love. We are more choosy than dogs. They love us when no one else will. We love them more than people, sometimes.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday.
