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1-7-1 contest62 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
This is the first 1-7-1 poem I've read, and it makes me want to try the form. Your interpretation is quite dramatic and the picture and title reinforce the subject perfectly. Best wishes in the contest and have a serene weekend- Joan
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2017
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This is the first 1-7-1 poem I've read, and it makes me want to try the form. Your interpretation is quite dramatic and the picture and title reinforce the subject perfectly. Best wishes in the contest and have a serene weekend- Joan
Comment Written 04-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2017
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HI Joan, I win third place...and that is fine...the short poems aren't always so easy...hard to tell a story in so few words...thank you for a great review sweet lady...hope you are having fun on your travels...love ya Linda xxoo
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Congratulations on having your poem well received. You were able to tell a complete story in very few words. Thanks for the good wishes and I hope the new week will be satisfying. More hugs- Joan
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thank you so very much...and you have a wonderful evening...xxoo love
Comment from Lu Saluna
I like your poem. It sends a strong message, very thought provoking.
Those "strangers", kids are so trusting and vulnerable. They feed on their vulnerability.
Best of in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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I like your poem. It sends a strong message, very thought provoking.
Those "strangers", kids are so trusting and vulnerable. They feed on their vulnerability.
Best of in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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HI Lu, we are living in dangerous times for everyone...thank you for a great review...and for your best wishes...love Linda xxoo
Comment from AnnaLinda
Whoa, Linda,
That's a difficult challenge!
That syllable count with a repeating
word in lines one and three.
I thank you for putting out such a
strong message in such a short
piece that makes an impacting
message and case for the
protection of children.
Bless you,
Linda
Tears...
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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Whoa, Linda,
That's a difficult challenge!
That syllable count with a repeating
word in lines one and three.
I thank you for putting out such a
strong message in such a short
piece that makes an impacting
message and case for the
protection of children.
Bless you,
Linda
Tears...
Comment Written 27-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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HI Linda, thank you for a wonderful review sweet girl...and all your wonderful stars...I am so glad that you like it you...God Bless...take care...Love Linda xxoo
Comment from Fridayauthor
This is great advise, given in any number of words. You did it very well here, with less than ten. The image you posted with the poem is perfect for your message.
Very well done indeed.
Thank you.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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This is great advise, given in any number of words. You did it very well here, with less than ten. The image you posted with the poem is perfect for your message.
Very well done indeed.
Thank you.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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Hi Friday, thank you so much for a great review...so glad you like it...love Linda xxoo
Comment from mbroyles2
Definitely great advice from a caring mother.
This is never a bad option.
I like the all caps and Bold letters.
Great writing!
Michael
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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Definitely great advice from a caring mother.
This is never a bad option.
I like the all caps and Bold letters.
Great writing!
Michael
Comment Written 27-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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HI Michael, thank you for great review...do glad you like it...Love Linda xxoo
Comment from Cedar
This is a strong entry in the short poem contest. Your words pack a very powerful message to all parents. I wish you the best of luck...Bill
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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This is a strong entry in the short poem contest. Your words pack a very powerful message to all parents. I wish you the best of luck...Bill
Comment Written 27-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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HI Bill, thank you for a wonderful review my friend...and allllll your wonderful stars...glad you like it...so good to see you...take care...God Bless...love Linda xxoo goodnight
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
OMG ... Linda, this is so scary and with a few words ... literally few words... you managed to capture the horror of every parent and child. Well done, sweetie pie. luv ya.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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OMG ... Linda, this is so scary and with a few words ... literally few words... you managed to capture the horror of every parent and child. Well done, sweetie pie. luv ya.
Gypsy
Comment Written 27-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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HI Queen of Haiku....thank you so very much for a great review you...it truly is so sad Gypsy that we have to scare our kids to protect them...sigh...thank you sweet girl...love ya to...Linda xxoo
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thank you, sweetie pie, luv ya
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smiling soooo big...xxoo Love
Comment from wondertwin
Wow! Very well So profoundly said in just nine words. This should be posted in every home and school! & wherever you found that picture... perfect! Blessings, AmyJo
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Wow! Very well So profoundly said in just nine words. This should be posted in every home and school! & wherever you found that picture... perfect! Blessings, AmyJo
Comment Written 27-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Hi AmyJo, I love your name...WOW!!!...thank you so much for a wonderful review...and all your wonderful stars...I am so glad you like it...and Blessing to you as well...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Jackarrie
Hi
I like your very short poem with 1-7-1 syllables. Yet it has much more content in the message.
Children must run, or suffer at the hands of evil intentions.
Well done
Mary
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Hi
I like your very short poem with 1-7-1 syllables. Yet it has much more content in the message.
Children must run, or suffer at the hands of evil intentions.
Well done
Mary
Comment Written 27-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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HI Mary, so good to see you...it is so sad we have to scare our kids to protect them...thank you for a great review...Love Linda xxoo
Comment from c_lucas
Strangers are feared, but death comes from the ones we know. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Strangers are feared, but death comes from the ones we know. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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HI Charlie, thank you for a great review sir...love Linda xxoo
