Daybreak
...when the moon and sun share a moment4 total reviews
Comment from Ogden
What a shame, June! I think you'd have a winner with this wonderful poem, even in a larger field, if not for the worthy entry that, at this writing, has a 16-vote lead, with 20 votes.
Don
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
What a shame, June! I think you'd have a winner with this wonderful poem, even in a larger field, if not for the worthy entry that, at this writing, has a 16-vote lead, with 20 votes.
Don
Comment Written 25-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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It's all good. I'm happy people read and review. Winning is the cherry on top, but the ice cream sundae is still delicious without it. Thank you for your support.
Comment from angel123
Your poem is interesting and well-written. I like your subject and message when the moon and sun share a moment. It reminds me of when the moon and sun appear in the sky at the same time. It's amazing. I don't remember seeing that, as a child.
angel123
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
Your poem is interesting and well-written. I like your subject and message when the moon and sun share a moment. It reminds me of when the moon and sun appear in the sky at the same time. It's amazing. I don't remember seeing that, as a child.
angel123
Comment Written 25-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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Thank you!
Comment from Moon baby
Hi There! That was a beautiful metaphor you wrote to go along with that gorgeous artwork! Wow, so pretty! Thank you it was nice to see and read!
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
Hi There! That was a beautiful metaphor you wrote to go along with that gorgeous artwork! Wow, so pretty! Thank you it was nice to see and read!
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Thank you!
Comment from Mary Wakeford
Thus reads like a bride greeting her groom at the altar. Great description with this poem. Nice photograph chosen as well.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
Thus reads like a bride greeting her groom at the altar. Great description with this poem. Nice photograph chosen as well.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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Thank you!