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Comment from Kingsrookviii
"Turned pages compose out rhymes together" ... This is so brilliant and I even got an auditory impression, as if hearing the collective pages turn as a congregation in church flips pages at about the same time. Wow, that's cool. I hope you are well. I got this strange thought to catch up with one other person and you today. I've no idea why, but I hope all is well. Take care. Bruce.
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"Turned pages compose out rhymes together" ... This is so brilliant and I even got an auditory impression, as if hearing the collective pages turn as a congregation in church flips pages at about the same time. Wow, that's cool. I hope you are well. I got this strange thought to catch up with one other person and you today. I've no idea why, but I hope all is well. Take care. Bruce.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2017
Comment from amada
Ageless Dorian Grey...a very soft and insinuating first lines that draws me into that ageless picture. You always write of things that intrigue me. Keep on going, great friend.
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Ageless Dorian Grey...a very soft and insinuating first lines that draws me into that ageless picture. You always write of things that intrigue me. Keep on going, great friend.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2017
Comment from Joan E.
As you can see, I'm still catching up from my trip. What an intriguing animated picture! I always enjoy your circularity, and I especially liked the "melodies play tunes to borrowed times". Hugs and have a productive new week- Joan
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As you can see, I'm still catching up from my trip. What an intriguing animated picture! I always enjoy your circularity, and I especially liked the "melodies play tunes to borrowed times". Hugs and have a productive new week- Joan
Comment Written 12-Feb-2017
Comment from RGstar
My dearest friend. How could I have missed this. I had some little problems home and have been in and out, but missing your work is a heartache.
I liked this little piece told in the ingenious way that captures the essence of the original with the addition of Dorian Gray gives that mirror extra worth.
Sorry to have missed this, my brother. My support for you is as endless as yours for me.
Best wishes.
RG
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My dearest friend. How could I have missed this. I had some little problems home and have been in and out, but missing your work is a heartache.
I liked this little piece told in the ingenious way that captures the essence of the original with the addition of Dorian Gray gives that mirror extra worth.
Sorry to have missed this, my brother. My support for you is as endless as yours for me.
Best wishes.
RG
Comment Written 02-Feb-2017
Comment from Leineco
and so the looking glass opens
a crack in the mirror
just w i d e n e d
patina slipped-slid from glazed eyes
and the lessons of ages
collided
composing new tunes for old sambas.
heart of love
faith scrolled across pages
and under skin's armour
flutters
evil of ages
bellows ageless
Bathsheba and David
still wait
patient
as new dawn of Venus arises
Dorian Grey revealed.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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and so the looking glass opens
a crack in the mirror
just w i d e n e d
patina slipped-slid from glazed eyes
and the lessons of ages
collided
composing new tunes for old sambas.
heart of love
faith scrolled across pages
and under skin's armour
flutters
evil of ages
bellows ageless
Bathsheba and David
still wait
patient
as new dawn of Venus arises
Dorian Grey revealed.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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Hello Lienko... -smile-.....I've taken a job in bum luck Egypt ....and am away from my computor and most of humanity at present ....but know you are dear to me and always will be . Love Michael
Comment from robina1978
Nice moving picture of a girl dancing in front of a mirror. I loved the stanza: Calypso captured in song of Siren. Should the last word not be plural? A perfect free style verse.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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Nice moving picture of a girl dancing in front of a mirror. I loved the stanza: Calypso captured in song of Siren. Should the last word not be plural? A perfect free style verse.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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Hello Sister....smile.....you sure look pretty today. And I thank you for brightening up this place. Love Michael
Comment from closetpoetjester
In a world where your barely able to grow old gracefully without the temptation of keeping up with the fresh faced youth of today...there are still some of us, who appreciate what's actually underneath. No matter HOW we look, it's our soul that touches another.
Love your writing Michael...always so sensual, no matter the subject. Most enjoyable, nicely done, smooth as silk.
Sassafrass
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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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In a world where your barely able to grow old gracefully without the temptation of keeping up with the fresh faced youth of today...there are still some of us, who appreciate what's actually underneath. No matter HOW we look, it's our soul that touches another.
Love your writing Michael...always so sensual, no matter the subject. Most enjoyable, nicely done, smooth as silk.
Sassafrass
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Comment Written 27-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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Hello Sassafrass....smile.....sorry I'm late....I'm out town pretty close to Australia I'm guessing. I suggest we meet at the Great Barrier Reef .....and riptide....I'll be in six pack abs ....you be in a bikini.....please. Love Michael
