Little Poems
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14 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A romantic walk in the snow in the comfort of following the footsteps of others and enjoying the ambiance and sparkle of the snow scene, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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A romantic walk in the snow in the comfort of following the footsteps of others and enjoying the ambiance and sparkle of the snow scene, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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Thank you Dolly. Glad to share the ambience you captured so well.
Comment from Selina Stambi
As shadows cast a spell in twilight glow,
the sparkles in the snow begin to glow,
like sprinkled dust the fairies might bestow. ... Love the picture these lines create in my head.
Tom, the mono-rhyme is beautifully and skillfully maintained.
I enjoy your poetry and the eclectic styles you bring to my attention.
Happy New Year, friend.
Sonali
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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As shadows cast a spell in twilight glow,
the sparkles in the snow begin to glow,
like sprinkled dust the fairies might bestow. ... Love the picture these lines create in my head.
Tom, the mono-rhyme is beautifully and skillfully maintained.
I enjoy your poetry and the eclectic styles you bring to my attention.
Happy New Year, friend.
Sonali
Comment Written 19-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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Thank you Sonali. Happy New year to you too.
Comment from tfawcus
I admire your tenacity in trying these various forms, Tom. I agree with you though - I don't think that this one will ever reach the mainstream! I think you'd be better employed getting out there and shovelling snow! LOL
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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I admire your tenacity in trying these various forms, Tom. I agree with you though - I don't think that this one will ever reach the mainstream! I think you'd be better employed getting out there and shovelling snow! LOL
Comment Written 19-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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Thank you Tony. Been doing just that.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello - this is a beautiful sonnet form which I have never come across before. All in monorhyme, you have written a lovely verse accompanied by a lovely photograph taken by you. I enjoyed the read. Well done! Warm regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2017
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Hello - this is a beautiful sonnet form which I have never come across before. All in monorhyme, you have written a lovely verse accompanied by a lovely photograph taken by you. I enjoyed the read. Well done! Warm regards Dorothy
Comment Written 19-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2017
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Thank you very much Dorothy. I like to research, find, and try new formats, Glad you liked it.
Comment from Pantygynt
Some fine internal/cross rhyme here as well in the first and last stanzas. Strange indeed that it should involve Pushkin's hero with not a feminine rhyme in sight. a couple of good alliterations in there as well but lingering on that particular seat might freeze one's butt solid, me thinks.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2017
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Some fine internal/cross rhyme here as well in the first and last stanzas. Strange indeed that it should involve Pushkin's hero with not a feminine rhyme in sight. a couple of good alliterations in there as well but lingering on that particular seat might freeze one's butt solid, me thinks.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2017
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Thank you Pantygynt, a very astute observation. I was glad I had my long-johns on under my bluejeans, as that metal seat was quite cold.
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I bet.
Comment from William Ross
Nice, I never seen this style sonnet before the same rhyme used on each verse. a nice poem about walking winter paths. thanks for the share and have a good day
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2017
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Nice, I never seen this style sonnet before the same rhyme used on each verse. a nice poem about walking winter paths. thanks for the share and have a good day
Comment Written 19-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2017
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Thank you William.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Arabian Onegin Sonnet and a new format never seen before. I like the lightness and very good flow of the sonnet. Definitely one format I would like to try.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2017
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A very well-written Arabian Onegin Sonnet and a new format never seen before. I like the lightness and very good flow of the sonnet. Definitely one format I would like to try.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2017
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Thank you Sandra, for the review and the six. Yes, give one a try.
Comment from marinadawn
Absolutely beautiful picture it fits in nicely with the beauty of winter that your poem speaks about.
While I am not a fan of winter cold , I can admire the beauty of it
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2017
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Absolutely beautiful picture it fits in nicely with the beauty of winter that your poem speaks about.
While I am not a fan of winter cold , I can admire the beauty of it
Comment Written 18-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2017
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Styank you marina dawn, i appreciate you observation and comments.
Comment from sunnilicious
I love leaving footprints in snow. It's more fun than sand, but cold. Nice wintry visual imagery. Good flow of rhythm and rhymes. Nice work. Great author notes too. Keep up the wonderful work :)
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2017
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I love leaving footprints in snow. It's more fun than sand, but cold. Nice wintry visual imagery. Good flow of rhythm and rhymes. Nice work. Great author notes too. Keep up the wonderful work :)
Comment Written 18-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2017
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Thank you Alicia.
Comment from Sixty70
Well I agree with your note. I would have had no idea about this poetry format if you hadn't provided that information!
Love the picture that this poem creates. Our Kansas winters have been too warm lately for much snow, but I remember years when the snow 'was layered', and our whole yard was a blanket of white, perforated by coyote tracks.
Wonderful photo! Enjoy winter.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2017
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Well I agree with your note. I would have had no idea about this poetry format if you hadn't provided that information!
Love the picture that this poem creates. Our Kansas winters have been too warm lately for much snow, but I remember years when the snow 'was layered', and our whole yard was a blanket of white, perforated by coyote tracks.
Wonderful photo! Enjoy winter.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2017
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Thank You Sixty70, snow sure does make for easy tracking.
