Little Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 441 "Tree Trimmer"Small and Specialty Poems
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Comment from His Grayness
I'm Totally unfamiliar with this particular style of poetry and I offer my stars for the lesson provided by this excellent poet. I liked the way the poem was packaged in photo and print and I cannot find anything to offer to improve this work. Many thanks for a fine read. HIS GRAYNESS
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017
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I'm Totally unfamiliar with this particular style of poetry and I offer my stars for the lesson provided by this excellent poet. I liked the way the poem was packaged in photo and print and I cannot find anything to offer to improve this work. Many thanks for a fine read. HIS GRAYNESS
Comment Written 10-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017
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Thank you Vance. I fully appreciate this wonderful review.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Not for the faint of heart. A high wire act juggling a chain saw. I couldn't watch. I bet that cost a pretty penny. Good job on an interesting form unknown to me. Well done Tom. Have a lovely day! Nancy
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Not for the faint of heart. A high wire act juggling a chain saw. I couldn't watch. I bet that cost a pretty penny. Good job on an interesting form unknown to me. Well done Tom. Have a lovely day! Nancy
Comment Written 10-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017
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Thank you Nancy. It definitely was a circus-like activity.
Comment from Pantygynt
I am currently conducting a class in FS on the subject of rhyme. but my next class, yet to be annnounced will feature continentental forms with repeating lines and I should very much like to use this poem as an example of the retourne if you you have no objection.
I missed the sawdust at the first pass but see it now. I trust this guy didn't have too much weight on that right leg of his. He doesn't appear to be using any safety harness eithe.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017
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I am currently conducting a class in FS on the subject of rhyme. but my next class, yet to be annnounced will feature continentental forms with repeating lines and I should very much like to use this poem as an example of the retourne if you you have no objection.
I missed the sawdust at the first pass but see it now. I trust this guy didn't have too much weight on that right leg of his. He doesn't appear to be using any safety harness eithe.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017
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Thank you Pantygynt. Yes, you can use it in your class. I would be honored. The worker did have safety gear on, but certainly pushed it to he limit.
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Thanks for the permit.
Comment from robina1978
The photo you made is brilliant, you are very good at this. It complements your poem very well. Yes, the sawdust you can easily see. Long time since I saw a Retourne poem.
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The photo you made is brilliant, you are very good at this. It complements your poem very well. Yes, the sawdust you can easily see. Long time since I saw a Retourne poem.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017
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Thank you Ine. I appreciate your wonderful review.
Comment from sunnilicious
Tree trimming is a lot of labor. Climbing and cutting and cleaning. Well thought out poem. Good visual imagery created. Creative. Good rhythm and rhyming scheme followed. Nice work.
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Tree trimming is a lot of labor. Climbing and cutting and cleaning. Well thought out poem. Good visual imagery created. Creative. Good rhythm and rhyming scheme followed. Nice work.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017
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Thank you Alicia. It was anazing to watch the crew work.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Retourne. It is a most important operation to do, or maybe suffer worse damages to the roof or building structures. Great photograph.
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A very well-written Retourne. It is a most important operation to do, or maybe suffer worse damages to the roof or building structures. Great photograph.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017
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Thank you Sandra. Glad I had it done.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem about tree trimming and being able to climb that high up. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017
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This is a very well written poem about tree trimming and being able to climb that high up. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 09-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much Teri.
Comment from zanya
This particular activity certainly drew out the poetic spirit ! bringing the arborist (beautiful word-don't hear it often enough!!!) and his tree cutting to life - so well portrayed in this Retourne - a form with which I'm not at all familiar
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017
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This particular activity certainly drew out the poetic spirit ! bringing the arborist (beautiful word-don't hear it often enough!!!) and his tree cutting to life - so well portrayed in this Retourne - a form with which I'm not at all familiar
Comment Written 09-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017
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Thank you Zanya. Please give one a try.
Comment from patcelaw
Treischel, this is a great pem. I love the clever line with which you end the poem, lending a sense of humor for the reader. Blessings throughout the new year. Patricia
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Treischel, this is a great pem. I love the clever line with which you end the poem, lending a sense of humor for the reader. Blessings throughout the new year. Patricia
Comment Written 09-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017
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Thank you very much Patricia.
Comment from Joan E.
Hello again--two posts in one day--you're making up for lost time with a literal "retourne"! I enjoyed the repeats and regular lines. Thanks for capturing the tree trimmer in action, and I am glad his acrobatics inspired you to create this poem. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017
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Hello again--two posts in one day--you're making up for lost time with a literal "retourne"! I enjoyed the repeats and regular lines. Thanks for capturing the tree trimmer in action, and I am glad his acrobatics inspired you to create this poem. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 09-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2017
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Thank youbJoan,. Got a lot of catching up to do.
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I very rarely feel caught up. Good luck and here's to a productive 2017- Joan
