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Comment from marinadawn
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This made me smile remembering as a child the many tricks my brothers employed and got me in trouble, it captures that feel perfectly of innocent fun

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 Comment Written 08-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 08-Jan-2017
    Thank you, marinadawn, for the nice review. Bill