2017 JAPANESE POETRY
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Guiding Light"A collection of Japanese poetry
15 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
HI Gypsy, I can't tell you how much I am enjoying reading everyone's haiku poems...it's has brightened up FanStory....and I love your poem...it brightened up this sea of Barley...soooo very well written sweet girl...and I love your picture...Love ya you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2017
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HI Gypsy, I can't tell you how much I am enjoying reading everyone's haiku poems...it's has brightened up FanStory....and I love your poem...it brightened up this sea of Barley...soooo very well written sweet girl...and I love your picture...Love ya you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 07-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2017
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Hello, how are you doing, sweetie pie? Thank you very much for reading and reviewing, you are always so kind to me ... I am grateful. Hugs!
Gypsy
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you are so welcome Gypsy...always...I hope to get caught up here soon...love xxoo
Comment from sandy montgomery
Your words cetainly describe the art well. Concise and clever your haiku is a gem. Great job. Thank you for sharing your work.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2017
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Your words cetainly describe the art well. Concise and clever your haiku is a gem. Great job. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2017
Comment from Douglas Paul
Well done my friend. Good aha moment in the satori. I really like "sea of barley".. The picyure is perfect for the verse. I like this one
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2017
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Well done my friend. Good aha moment in the satori. I really like "sea of barley".. The picyure is perfect for the verse. I like this one
Comment Written 04-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2017
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I am happy you like the satori. I like the sea of barley, me too. :)
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Hello, my friend - it's difficult to know just what to say about these short
pieces - although it's amazing what can be said in so few words - as your
Haiku proves. Most enjoyable and I love the presentation.
Margaret
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2017
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Hello, my friend - it's difficult to know just what to say about these short
pieces - although it's amazing what can be said in so few words - as your
Haiku proves. Most enjoyable and I love the presentation.
Margaret
Comment Written 03-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2017
Comment from Joan E.
What a wonderfully parallel artwork you selected! I liked being transported to a "sea of barley" and relished your use of alliteration in this haiku. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2017
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What a wonderfully parallel artwork you selected! I liked being transported to a "sea of barley" and relished your use of alliteration in this haiku. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 03-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2017
Comment from Sasha
Excellent presentation of this beautiful haiku. The scene you describe is one that takes our breath away when we actually see it. Marvelous work with this one. Thanks so much for sharing this with us. For some reason, this timed out so I am trying to send it again. You may get it twice.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2017
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Excellent presentation of this beautiful haiku. The scene you describe is one that takes our breath away when we actually see it. Marvelous work with this one. Thanks so much for sharing this with us. For some reason, this timed out so I am trying to send it again. You may get it twice.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2017
Comment from DR DIP
Yep that one sums up the picture perfectly not cryptic at all Did you write the words inspired by the image Gypsy? Its a perfect interpretation.
dip
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2017
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Yep that one sums up the picture perfectly not cryptic at all Did you write the words inspired by the image Gypsy? Its a perfect interpretation.
dip
Comment Written 02-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Dr. Dipp :)
Gypsy Sensei Hugs
Comment from brenda bickers
Hi GBR,
even on a dark gloomy day the light manages to seep through and shine on natures glory. A wonderful picture to accompany you Haiku.
Brenda:))x
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2017
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Hi GBR,
even on a dark gloomy day the light manages to seep through and shine on natures glory. A wonderful picture to accompany you Haiku.
Brenda:))x
Comment Written 02-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Brenda :) you are very kind to read so many of my haiku.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
The imagery is concrete and well connected, the kigo is well defined, and the satori a clean observation. Nicely done and I thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2017
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The imagery is concrete and well connected, the kigo is well defined, and the satori a clean observation. Nicely done and I thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Monica, I am grateful for your kind review.
Gypsy Sensei
Comment from Dean Kuch
The word, "translucent" implies murkiness to me. It's as if something...some wisdom or direction...is trying to get through to you concerning the pathways you should choose in life, but it's as yet still a bit unclear.
The second line of your phrase indicates the nourishment & strength, both spiritual as well as physical, you'll need to help see you through and bring you to that pathway.
The satori is an epiphany or awakening of sorts. But eventually, the light will get through and your pathway will be illuminated clearly.
I'm probably reading way too much into this.
You might be talking about nothing more than barley in the inky darkness of night, LOL.
Nice work, Gypsy.
Dean
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2017
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The word, "translucent" implies murkiness to me. It's as if something...some wisdom or direction...is trying to get through to you concerning the pathways you should choose in life, but it's as yet still a bit unclear.
The second line of your phrase indicates the nourishment & strength, both spiritual as well as physical, you'll need to help see you through and bring you to that pathway.
The satori is an epiphany or awakening of sorts. But eventually, the light will get through and your pathway will be illuminated clearly.
I'm probably reading way too much into this.
You might be talking about nothing more than barley in the inky darkness of night, LOL.
Nice work, Gypsy.
Dean
Comment Written 02-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2017
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A very interesting interpretation ... you made me think LOL Thank you, Deano-son Grasshopper 2
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The pleasure was entirely mine, Sensei Gypsy Blue Rose.
You are more than welcome!
Haiku Hugs!!!
Deano-son
