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Vertically sequential poems

14 total reviews 
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
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Congrats on winning the Acrostic contest, Marilyn! Somehow I missed seeing this poem earlier. I just now saw it when I went into the voting booth.

Great words to live by are clearly expressed and well conveyed to your reader in this acrostic poem. I especially like "dreams are good, but action's better", and that ties in so perfectly with the picture and the words "Easy does it, but do it".

Well done!

Connie

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 08-Jan-2017
    Thank you for your review, Connie. I was surprised that I won the contest. There were some good entries in it. Just the same--I'm really happy that I did win. Marilyn
Comment from Jackarrie
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Congratulations on your great win, Your Acrostic was very inspiring and has great positive advice for us all to take notice of.

Mary

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 06-Jan-2017
    Hi Mary. Thank you for your supportive review and congrats. I truly appreciate it. Marilyn
Comment from Chrissy710
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Hi Marilyn Congratulations on you winning Acrostic I was pleased to see you win and maybe you will also win the Ranking race LOL Your wise words are to be taken up yes live for today Cheers Christine

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2017
    Hi Chrissy. Thank you for your nice review and for your congratulations. I don't know about the ranking. Did you write a poem for the Picture This? I checked everybody and didn't see one for you. Will look again. :) Marilyn
reply by Chrissy710 on 06-Jan-2017
    Hi Marilyn no not this time I must get back into these. Have been busy of late and have not kept up. But I enjoyed reading yours Cheers Christine
Comment from angel123
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I like your uplifting words of encouragement and inspiration. Your poem flows with good sense and your artwork choice is enhances your poem. I like the ending of your poem and I would align the stanza's instead of centering it. Acrostic poems look better aligned in my opinion.

Angel123


 Comment Written 05-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2017
    Hi Angel. I surely appreciate your fine review and comments. Thank you.
Comment from Sherman541
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Good way of talking about life. I love the picture of the cat. Shows how we would all like to relax more often, just set take in the view, read a book or just watch what others do. However, you are right to get anywhere in one's life - actions make things happen. Great Job - Sarah

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 04-Jan-2017
    Thank you, Sarah. I appreciate your review. Marilyn
reply by Sherman541 on 04-Jan-2017
    you are very welcome - Sarah
Comment from robyn corum
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I have a hunch I know who this writer is - it looks like their style. I'll have to go check and see if I'm right when I'm done here. *smile* Loved the poem, of course~! Good luck!

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 04-Jan-2017
    Hi Robyn. Thank you for your review. I appreciate your support.
Comment from sunnilicious
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Motivational poem. I like the lyrical flow. Subtle rhymes nicely pulls this poem together. Good message with value. Well thought out and nicely written. Great work. Enjoyable to read.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2017
    Hi Alicia. You are so right about motivation. Sometimes all there is to review is gloom and doom. That's okay sometimes, but I like to read positive things. I try to make most of mine upbeat, not always though. Thank you for your review.
Comment from winnona
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A well-written contest entry. The words are good strong words that flow together easily and combine to form the message of the poem for the reader. The artwork completed the piece well.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2017
    Hi Winnona. Thank you for your very nice review.
Comment from cumulus365
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This reminder poem is one for me. I like for each letter you found the words to go with it. I like the illustration. Cats are certainly very cute. They are the type will do at its own leisure. Best, cumulus

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2017
    Hi Cumulus. Thank you for your review. Much appreciated. Marilyn
reply by cumulus365 on 03-Jan-2017
    You're welcome. Regards, cumulus
Comment from RodG
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I do like your philosophy of life, Marilyn. I like the optimism and the overall uplifting tone. This certainly is good advice for not just beginning a new year, but for every day. Thanks for sharing. Rod

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017
    Hi Rod. Thank you for your upbeat review and comments which are much appreciated.
reply by RodG on 01-Jan-2017
    Always a pleasure. Rod