Roast potatoes
The stress of cooking a Christmas meal62 total reviews
Comment from William Ross
Nice, I'm glad you remembered the babe in the stable and it's not all about receiving gifts. Nicely done, good luck on this and have a great day
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2016
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Nice, I'm glad you remembered the babe in the stable and it's not all about receiving gifts. Nicely done, good luck on this and have a great day
Comment Written 17-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2016
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Your positive review and good wishes are much appreciated. Thank you William. Happy Christmas to you.
Comment from dragonpoet
Although family togetherness and the meal is an important part of Christmas. We can't let the stress make us forget the real reason for the season, which you remind us about at the end of the poem.
It flows well and the rhymes are simple and unforced.
Merry Christmas.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2016
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Although family togetherness and the meal is an important part of Christmas. We can't let the stress make us forget the real reason for the season, which you remind us about at the end of the poem.
It flows well and the rhymes are simple and unforced.
Merry Christmas.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2016
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Thank you dragonpoet. You always encourage me and I so appreciate your comments.p
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You're welcome. We here to help and encourage each other.
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