Ghostly Guest
He hogs the remote!38 total reviews
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Oh dear leave alone I say you can do more harm if you try to investigate the source , my daughter in law lived in a haunted house next door to me she had to have the house blessed . Well done on this write regards Jill
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2016
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Oh dear leave alone I say you can do more harm if you try to investigate the source , my daughter in law lived in a haunted house next door to me she had to have the house blessed . Well done on this write regards Jill
Comment Written 07-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2016
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I'm sure there's nothing to worry about. It's probably just a wonky old TV. Nothing bad has happened. Glad you liked my poem. Thanks for the review and the stars.
Comment from Heather Knight
Well, at least it's a friendly ghost.
Your poem it's so much fun. I had a great time reading it. It's easy to follow and the rhyme creates a lovely sound.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2016
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Well, at least it's a friendly ghost.
Your poem it's so much fun. I had a great time reading it. It's easy to follow and the rhyme creates a lovely sound.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2016
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Thanks. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from misscookie
The artwork you choose to go with your poem
Captured my attention from the start
and as I read you supernatural poem
all I could do was smile
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016
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The artwork you choose to go with your poem
Captured my attention from the start
and as I read you supernatural poem
all I could do was smile
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 06-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016
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Thanks. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from sanejane
You don't have to worry until the screen goes blank, followed by a live image of you as you're sitting watching it, and a ghostly voice giving you a personal message.
I enjoyed this eerie, humorous poem. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016
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You don't have to worry until the screen goes blank, followed by a live image of you as you're sitting watching it, and a ghostly voice giving you a personal message.
I enjoyed this eerie, humorous poem. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016
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If that happens I'm calling Ghostbusters for sure! LOL Glad you enjoyed my fun little poem. Thanks for the stars an the great review.
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It's my pleasure :-)
Comment from trumby
I enjoyed reading this intriguing poem. But I am not sure if I would love a ghost visitor at home, my wife will definitely freak out. Good rhyming and an interesting read. Very enjoyable. The picture you chose is just perfect for the message of your poem. Very well done, keep sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016
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I enjoyed reading this intriguing poem. But I am not sure if I would love a ghost visitor at home, my wife will definitely freak out. Good rhyming and an interesting read. Very enjoyable. The picture you chose is just perfect for the message of your poem. Very well done, keep sharing.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016
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Thanks. I'm not sure it's a ghost. Probably I need a new TV. But it was a fun poem to write. Glad you enjoyed.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
LOL! Cute poem about a not toooo annoying ghost. Maybe one you can live with... so far, anyway. :)
I think you should put a capital G on Ghostbusters.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016
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LOL! Cute poem about a not toooo annoying ghost. Maybe one you can live with... so far, anyway. :)
I think you should put a capital G on Ghostbusters.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016
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Thanks. I think what I need is a new TV. I'll fix Ghostbusters. Doubt I'll need to call them. LOL
Comment from seaglass
I've moved around a lot in my life, and there are two houses that were truly weird. One I vacated after 6 months. Love this poem. It has great rhyme and ends on a humorous note.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016
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I've moved around a lot in my life, and there are two houses that were truly weird. One I vacated after 6 months. Love this poem. It has great rhyme and ends on a humorous note.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016
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Thanks. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I think I might need a new TV.
Comment from patcelaw
I think you should be charging him rent and a hefty amount at that. I am not sure I want a ghost to be a visitor in my home. Blessings, Patricia
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016
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I think you should be charging him rent and a hefty amount at that. I am not sure I want a ghost to be a visitor in my home. Blessings, Patricia
Comment Written 05-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016
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Yep, I just have to figure out how to collect it. LOL I think I probably need a new TV, not Ghostbusters. Thanks for the stars.
Comment from Irish Rain
Love this lighthearted look at ghosties...does someone REALLY play with your hair? Cuz that would freak me out! If he/she's no nuisance, let them inspire these fun poems! Blessings...
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016
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Love this lighthearted look at ghosties...does someone REALLY play with your hair? Cuz that would freak me out! If he/she's no nuisance, let them inspire these fun poems! Blessings...
Comment Written 05-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016
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The hair thing happened years ago, not since I've lived here. I'm really not sure what caused it. Ghost or not, it's not doing any harm so I'm not going to worry about it. Thanks for the review and the stars.
Comment from krys123
Happy holidays, Cindy
-before I forget there's a line in your fourth verse and I believe it is your fourth line will you write "but he often messes with the heat" I think it would be much more fun to write "but often messes up what's neat." That would show that is a mischievous ghost. Even though in the next verse you stated he never leaves messes in the sink.
-I really liked your poem and I thought it was really keen with good enjambment throughout without a hiccup or a syntactical break in the reading of the writing of your poem in which The conceptual theme solid throughout.
-Thanks for sharing and take care and do have a happy holiday.
Alex
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016
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Happy holidays, Cindy
-before I forget there's a line in your fourth verse and I believe it is your fourth line will you write "but he often messes with the heat" I think it would be much more fun to write "but often messes up what's neat." That would show that is a mischievous ghost. Even though in the next verse you stated he never leaves messes in the sink.
-I really liked your poem and I thought it was really keen with good enjambment throughout without a hiccup or a syntactical break in the reading of the writing of your poem in which The conceptual theme solid throughout.
-Thanks for sharing and take care and do have a happy holiday.
Alex
Comment Written 05-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016
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Thanks. I'll take another look at those lines. Glad you enjoyed.
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You're welcome, Cindy.
Alex
