Comment from Heather Knight

Excellent

This is a beautifully written poem full of hope. No matter how ugly things turn, we always have Jesus.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2016

Thanks Maria, for this great review, comments,

Comment from honeytree

Excellent

Really loved the art work
so much here for this poem
We do find and receive much
hope from God many times
within our lives everyday
in many ways.

Honey tree

I have no six left.

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2016

Thanks Annie, for this great review and comments, and virtual six.

Comment from judester

Excellent

This is a great poem on the power of Faith. People without Faith are constantly tossed by life's "billowing storms." The same with bullying, if the victim has faith in themselves and a little self esteem, the taunts would wash right over them. See you at the finish line, cheers, judester.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2016

Thanks for this great review and comments,

Comment from zanya

Excellent

Yes a beacon of Hope is portrayed here for those times- and they seem to be on the increase ?- when 'life can lose that peaceful seal'- HOpe that is 'clothed in Jesus name'-

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2016

Thanks for this great review,

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi there, As spiritual poems go this is very subtle and I like that. It has a great message and also some great imagery. Good luck in the contest. All the best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2016

Thanks for this great review Ulla

Comment from sandy montgomery

Excellent

What a wonderful and inspirational poem. This is a great reminder that God's love is always there for us. Great imagery and a lovely entry into the contest. Thank you for sharing your work.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2016

Thanks for this great review, Sandy

Comment from papa55mike

Excellent

This is a wonderfully written poem and I love the style it's wrote in. I've read a couple of these today and I really like this one. Jesus is always the answer but sometimes we need to be pointed in the right direction. I wish I had a six for you.

Good luck in the contest.
Have a great day and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2016

Thanks for this great review, Mike.

Comment from quicksandyamurray

Exceptional

Absolutely beautiful and true. I like the reference throuigh the torns, the hurt and sins that Christ took upon himself for us. A Psalm I would say. Definitly a poetic promise of God's love. It is bitter-sweet. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2016

Thanks for this msrvellous review, and very generous comments and rating, I appreciate it.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

There is very nice rhyming and good message in your poem. I like
the rhyme pattern and lined stanzas of 4-5-1-4. This irregular
format by the poet allows the reader to focus on those lines. Much
luck in the contest. Marilyn

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2016

Thanks Marilyn, for this great review,

Comment from davisr (Rhonda)

Excellent

How very pretty!
A simple message of hope amidst pain and disappointment.
Don't despair! I love it, and then you remind us of God's love, and of His son Jesus.
Thank you for the warm feeling,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2016

Thanks Rhonda,for this great review and comments.