Behind the smile
One doesn't always see the raised eyebrow.4 total reviews
Comment from Richard J
Hi, Dallas!
I voted for this one because it made the most sense, for the truth in the message, and keen appeal of the artistic layout/presentation.
Plus, it's the title of my book ... LOL!
I ordered yours, BTW, and found it to be a stellar read ... thank you.
Kudos on the nice win!
Seems others agreed, eh? ~ Richard : )
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2016
Hi, Dallas!
I voted for this one because it made the most sense, for the truth in the message, and keen appeal of the artistic layout/presentation.
Plus, it's the title of my book ... LOL!
I ordered yours, BTW, and found it to be a stellar read ... thank you.
Kudos on the nice win!
Seems others agreed, eh? ~ Richard : )
Comment Written 17-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2016
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Thank you for the support.
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How could I not? : )
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Ya betcha! : )
Comment from rama devi
THIS IS ELOQUENT AND WITTY. SATIRICAL TOO LOVE THE EDGINESS.
oops caps lock--didn't meant to shout!
This has a potent punch in the closing line and I love the use of grimy with intent. Fine alliteration of soft I and assonance of hard I as well
This is unique and very effective!
Strong contender for my vote.
Warmly, r d
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2016
THIS IS ELOQUENT AND WITTY. SATIRICAL TOO LOVE THE EDGINESS.
oops caps lock--didn't meant to shout!
This has a potent punch in the closing line and I love the use of grimy with intent. Fine alliteration of soft I and assonance of hard I as well
This is unique and very effective!
Strong contender for my vote.
Warmly, r d
Comment Written 13-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2016
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Thanks for the stellar review. r d. Appreciate it.
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:-)))
Comment from lucky linda
I found your poem very thought provoking and you show how vile innuendos can be. It made me feel sad, that we need to remind each other of this fact. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2016
I found your poem very thought provoking and you show how vile innuendos can be. It made me feel sad, that we need to remind each other of this fact. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2016
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from winnona
A well written writing prompt entry. Your words flowed well combining easily and forming the message o the poem for the reader. I think you completed the challenge of the prompt well.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2016
A well written writing prompt entry. Your words flowed well combining easily and forming the message o the poem for the reader. I think you completed the challenge of the prompt well.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2016
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Thank you for the kind review.