Jump
1-6-1 form60 total reviews
Comment from RoostyNester
A cute little 1-6-1 poem about Goofy falling down with a thump. Well done in verse and style. Cute picture to give insight to your poem. I liked it.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
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A cute little 1-6-1 poem about Goofy falling down with a thump. Well done in verse and style. Cute picture to give insight to your poem. I liked it.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
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HI Roosty, thank you so very much...I am so glad you like it....xxoo
Comment from GabbyLew
I'm always impressed when members take on these small syllable-count poems. I love the image that accompanies this.
As far as the poem goes, the meaning is simply stated. The "thump" is a great auditory finish to the poem.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
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I'm always impressed when members take on these small syllable-count poems. I love the image that accompanies this.
As far as the poem goes, the meaning is simply stated. The "thump" is a great auditory finish to the poem.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
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Hi Gabby, thank you so very much for a great review...I am so glad you like it...xxoo
Comment from lyenochka
Great use of the picture and the few words to describe an entire comical mental image! It also has a good audio effect with the repetition of the -ump rhymes which does complete the image of the fall.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
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Great use of the picture and the few words to describe an entire comical mental image! It also has a good audio effect with the repetition of the -ump rhymes which does complete the image of the fall.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
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HI Lyenochka, thank you so very much...I am so glad you like it...xxoo
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
An adorable poem that mixes real danger with comic characters. I love the feel of the jump, bump wording. It makes you feel involved in the poem.
Great job, and best of luck in the contest,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
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An adorable poem that mixes real danger with comic characters. I love the feel of the jump, bump wording. It makes you feel involved in the poem.
Great job, and best of luck in the contest,
Rhonda
Comment Written 07-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
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Hi Rhonda, thank you so very much...I am so glad you like it...and thank you for the best of luck...xxoo
Comment from Ryn
Love your choice of artwork.. It all works. I like the blue background color, I am very visual. Now for the poem....good choice of wording and cleaver.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
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Love your choice of artwork.. It all works. I like the blue background color, I am very visual. Now for the poem....good choice of wording and cleaver.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
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HI Ryn, thank you so very much...I am so glad you like it...xxoo
Comment from Irish Rain
Poor Goofy. He was always hitting them stumps, ha ha. Cute and clever 1-6-1...best of luck to you in this contest, blessings...
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
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Poor Goofy. He was always hitting them stumps, ha ha. Cute and clever 1-6-1...best of luck to you in this contest, blessings...
Comment Written 07-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
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HI Judy, thank you so very much for a great review...yes he was...he's one of my favorites...I am so glad you like it...and thank you for your best of luck...xxoo
Comment from Dean Kuch
Don't ya just hate it when that happens, Anonymous Poet?
There you are, just walkin' along, minding your own business... when all of a sudden, out of the blue, a stump pops up right in front of you just as you take that first leap into the air.
Why, it's enough to bring even the stoutest person to their trees...uh, heh-heh...knees, I meant knees, of course.
Ahem...
Best of luck to you in the contest.
~Dean ;}
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
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Don't ya just hate it when that happens, Anonymous Poet?
There you are, just walkin' along, minding your own business... when all of a sudden, out of the blue, a stump pops up right in front of you just as you take that first leap into the air.
Why, it's enough to bring even the stoutest person to their trees...uh, heh-heh...knees, I meant knees, of course.
Ahem...
Best of luck to you in the contest.
~Dean ;}
Comment Written 07-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
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HI Dean, goofy is one of my favorites....thank you for a great review....I am so glad you like it...xxoo
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a fun poem in a unique form - difficult to accomplish as well as you did, but you did, and it complies fully with the prompt. Good Luck in the contest...
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2016
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In my opinion, a fun poem in a unique form - difficult to accomplish as well as you did, but you did, and it complies fully with the prompt. Good Luck in the contest...
Comment Written 07-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2016
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thank you so very much...and thank you for the good luck...
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You are very welcome...
Comment from tfawcus
An amusing response to the challenge - unless, of course, you happen to be Goofy! I've come to grief tripping over the occasional stump in long grass, but I tend to look before I leap these days!
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
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An amusing response to the challenge - unless, of course, you happen to be Goofy! I've come to grief tripping over the occasional stump in long grass, but I tend to look before I leap these days!
Comment Written 07-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
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HI Tony, LOL...thank you so very much for a great review...Goofy is one of my favorites...so glad you like it...xxoo
Comment from Susanjohn
hahahaha this is something I would do!!!! clever little poem here!!! I enjoyed reading!!! good luck to you in the contest!! :-))))
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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2016
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hahahaha this is something I would do!!!! clever little poem here!!! I enjoyed reading!!! good luck to you in the contest!! :-))))
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Comment Written 07-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2016
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you are so very welcome Susan...smiling back at ya
