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Once Upon a Time

childhood days

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Comment from foxangie123
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I love this and tge pucture you chose reminds me of Peter Pan. This is a great poem and entry that is very much perfect indeed. Best of wishes.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2016


reply by the author on 22-Oct-2016
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from RodG
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I like I the simplicity of your reminiscing here and how thankful you are for a blessed childhood. I will never be a fan of AABB rhyming, but it works here as a means of taking us back in time.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2016


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2016
    Thank you for taking the time to read and leave an excellent review.
Comment from Quantum Traveler
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Memories of Childhood Past.
The Art Work syncs quite well with this writing it is how I remember drawings by parents and grandparents when stories were told.
To look at this piece of Art Work I could open a scrapbook of my Irish Mother's drawings and it would sync right in with hers...This is an Irish Drawing from the Past.
How Blessed we are to have such memorable childhood days...as I sit with a group of youth and talk about my childhood days compared to theirs today so many would like to go back in time and visit our childhood and the Freedom that once was ours.
In the Apple Orchard next to where I live a place is set apart for kids to come an experience different activities...Right now there are hundreds of pumpkins laid out for kids to ramble through and pick the very best one just for themselves...Elementary school classes are able to come here for a field trip...hay rides around the apple orchard are also available for the little ones.
Maybe they will remember the apple orchard that is surrounded by homes that use to be acres upon acres of orchards.
We are Blessed for the memories we have in this country.
Thanks for the memories...Well Done...Quantum Traveler...Phil.


 Comment Written 21-Oct-2016


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2016
    my computer is telling me the first Thank you didn't go through so just in case, here's another. Thank you for your childhood memories shared and for the kind review.
reply by Quantum Traveler on 21-Oct-2016
    The second thank you came through ok.
    It was my pleasure the writing and art work brought back a lot of great memories...That's one of the reasons we write isn't it?
    There are kids who have no childhood memories other than continuous violence wish I could change that...Quantum Traveler...Phil.