Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Yep! October is the busiest time for witches. Then they can fly off to the islands for a swim and fun in the sun for a long vacation. Good composition in this fun haiku. Marilyn

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2016

Thanks Marilyn for reviewing. I loved your comments and of course the stars :) MMMM I wonder if they use airplanes or their brooms lol

reply by BeasPeas on 23-Oct-2016

I think they should ride their brooms--less frustrating and more efficient than taking a plane.

reply by the author on 23-Oct-2016

Amen to that, I totally agree and of course they just zap up whatever they need. lol

reply by BeasPeas on 23-Oct-2016

Maybe I'll zap away my housework.

reply by the author on 23-Oct-2016

LOL that one doesn't work I have tried it.

reply by BeasPeas on 23-Oct-2016

I imagine you have tried it. But we can go wherever we want to in our mind.

reply by the author on 24-Oct-2016

Yes we can wherever and whenever.

Comment from angel123

Excellent

Your October Haiku poem celebrates the Halloween season. It is interesting and descriptive. It flows well and I enjoyed reading it.

Angel123

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2016

Thank you for reading and reviewing, Your kind comments are very much appreciated as are the stars.

Comment from mvbrooks

Excellent

Your poem meets the syllable and line count required while adding a theme timely for the approaching holiday. Good luck in your contest.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2016

Thank you for reading and reviewing, Your kind comments are very much appreciated as are the stars. And your good luck wishes.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

You did a great job, mystery author, with your syllable counts per lines. Your color scheme is perfect. Good job on your well-chosen words for October. I like the 'close out' line.

Best wishes in the contest. Jan

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2016

Thank you for reading and reviewing, Your kind comments are very much appreciated.

Comment from pharp

Excellent

Excellent job in the penning of this October Haiku. It really closes out the month with this Haiku " October witches - cackle, brew and fly on brooms". Outstanding job, I really enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing and the very best to you in the contest. Blessings................Portia

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2016

Thank you so much for reviewing, I truly appreciate your comments and of course the stars. The good luck wishes made me smile, thanks.

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

I am grinning big time - this is very clever. The prompt challenge is one hundred percent met in a highly entertaining and creative way. You remind us of the holiday that occurs in that month, and evoke much delightful imagery!

Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2016

Thank you so much for reviewing, I truly appreciate your comments and of course the stars. The good luck wishes made me smile, thanks.

reply by Dawn Munro on 22-Oct-2016

My pleasure.

Comment from ywedgwood

Average

This poem follows the Haiku rules and the message is clear that after the witches depart on Halloween, that gets rid of October for yet another year.
Very succintly put.

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 Comment Written 22-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2016

Thank you for reviewing , your comments and the stars.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello my friend

Nice haiku with good connection of lines one and two. Also, it's better to avoid punctuation (commas)

Satori could improve with tiny adjustment....

October's closeout.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2016

Thank you for reviewing and your constructive comments, well appreciated.

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Well I think you have followed the haiku form to the T with two concrete images, and an excellent aha satori line. Also no artwork as stated and it isn't necessary because I can totally see this.

Great job and best wishes to you in the contest.

Gloria

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2016

Thank you so much for reviewing, I truly appreciate your comments and of course the stars. The good luck wishes made me smile, thanks.

Comment from joannakruk

Excellent

Great work, indeed it is the image that we are left with at the end of October, scary, haunting and devilish...luckily Christmas counters that...get your wallets out parents....yet again haha

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2016

Thank you so much for reviewing, I truly appreciate your comments and of course the stars.