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Learning to dance13 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Good use of motion in this description of both the ballerina and ballet. Good palindrome poem.
Congrats on the honorable mention in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2016
Good use of motion in this description of both the ballerina and ballet. Good palindrome poem.
Congrats on the honorable mention in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 26-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2016
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Thanks so much for reading.
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You are very welcome.
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Comment from misscookie
You captured my attention from the lovely painting
To the words of the poem
This one truly touched my heart. My great grand daughter is taking dancing lessons and she does and loves every move.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2016
You captured my attention from the lovely painting
To the words of the poem
This one truly touched my heart. My great grand daughter is taking dancing lessons and she does and loves every move.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 21-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2016
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Thanks so much for reading, Cookie.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Maria
= Great description of a ballerina.
= Perfect artwork and formatting.
= Very girlish. (*<*)
= Good luck in the contest with your great entry.
= Sorry for the long response time.
= Spent the last four days in chaos working on kitchen.
= Had to empty cabinets/drawers, and then put them back.
= I'm exhausted, but so worth the hard work.
<> A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside-down (*>*)
<> Cheers & Blessings <> Jax
<> Published as <> Jacqueline M Franklin
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2016
Hi, Maria
= Great description of a ballerina.
= Perfect artwork and formatting.
= Very girlish. (*<*)
= Good luck in the contest with your great entry.
= Sorry for the long response time.
= Spent the last four days in chaos working on kitchen.
= Had to empty cabinets/drawers, and then put them back.
= I'm exhausted, but so worth the hard work.
<> A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside-down (*>*)
<> Cheers & Blessings <> Jax
<> Published as <> Jacqueline M Franklin
Comment Written 20-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2016
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I saw the pictures of your kitchen in Facebook. Glad it's over.
Thanks for reading.
Comment from Jackarrie
Hi Maria
I love this Palindrome poem, a great way to use the lovely words with ballet. The image is beautiful. My two granddaughters do ballet and I love to watch the video they send me
Good luck in the contest
Mary
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2016
Hi Maria
I love this Palindrome poem, a great way to use the lovely words with ballet. The image is beautiful. My two granddaughters do ballet and I love to watch the video they send me
Good luck in the contest
Mary
Comment Written 20-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2016
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Thanks for reading and reviewing, Mary. Have a great day. We're having Irish weather over here at the moment.
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Thanks for reading and reviewing, Mary. Have a great day. We're having Irish weather over here at the moment.
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Yes I know maria I am in Spain but it is still quite warm
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Yeah, it's not too cold, but I've heard it's going to be the coldest winter in 100 years. I wonder if it's true.
Comment from DR DIP
Nice palindrome. My sister did ballet as a little girl so a lot of those terms are familiar
Nice description of the actions of a ballerina
dip
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2016
Nice palindrome. My sister did ballet as a little girl so a lot of those terms are familiar
Nice description of the actions of a ballerina
dip
Comment Written 19-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2016
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Thanks for reading this one, Mark.
Comment from aryr
This was an enjoyment to read. I could actually picture the movements, the freedom as indicated in the poem. It was very interesting to read and presented a flow of comfort and peace. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2016
This was an enjoyment to read. I could actually picture the movements, the freedom as indicated in the poem. It was very interesting to read and presented a flow of comfort and peace. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2016
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Thanks for reading, Aryr. You're always so kind!
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You are welcome, your work is rather good and enjoyable so you get all the credit, I just read and enjoy.
Comment from winnona
I can picture the little ballerina dancing. your words flowed well line to line combining and forming the message of the poem for the reader. Well done.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2016
I can picture the little ballerina dancing. your words flowed well line to line combining and forming the message of the poem for the reader. Well done.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2016
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Thanks, Winnona.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very good Palindrome poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Good luck in the contest. Hugs, Teri
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2016
This is a very good Palindrome poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Good luck in the contest. Hugs, Teri
Comment Written 18-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2016
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Thanks, Tery. Big hug.
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Hope you have a very blessed day! hugs, Teri
Comment from damommy
Great palindrome. It takes a lot of thought and effort to achieve one of these, and you've written an awesome one.
The photo is perfect for this.
Thank you. 8-)
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2016
Great palindrome. It takes a lot of thought and effort to achieve one of these, and you've written an awesome one.
The photo is perfect for this.
Thank you. 8-)
Comment Written 18-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2016
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Wow! Thanks for the great review. I didn't expect such a rating. This is my first palindrome and quite a simple one. You're very kind.
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No, you deserved it. 8-)
Comment from robyn corum
MJ,
This is definitely one of the best palindrome poems I have EVER seen. Great job thinking it through with ballet and these movement words. I hope you win!
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2016
MJ,
This is definitely one of the best palindrome poems I have EVER seen. Great job thinking it through with ballet and these movement words. I hope you win!
Comment Written 18-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2016
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Are you serious? I thought it was too simple... I still don't feel comfortable writing poetry...
Thanks for reading.