Comment from Heidi M

Excellent

Wow, this took some creative thinking to come up with. You complied with the directions for the contest and even found a picture to match! Very clever.

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Sep-2016

Hi Heidi, Yes it was challenging but fun to try and compose a story with these requirements and this is my attempt and I am pleasec you stopped by to have a read and appreciate your lovely review Cheers

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

I would have to say that this is one of the most memorable and imaginative poetic verse that I have reviewed in quite some time. Well done.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2016

Hi Don andVicki Thank
you so much for your encouraging words for my alphabet entry It was fun thinking up something that made some sort of sense even if it is a bit outrageous You comments are much appreciated Cheers for your review and time

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

very well done with this creative piece of writing. These don't really lend themselves to great stories but this is good and fun.

All the best
GMG

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2016

Hi GMG Thanks so much for reading and reviewing my alphabet entry It was a fun challenge and I hope this makes the grade . Yes it is quite difficult Cheers for your time and review.

Comment from oliver818

Excellent

Nice story, this is a difficult task and I liked your happy zebra tale. Thanks for sharing, good luck with the competition and have a great day

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016

Hi oliver818, Thank you for reading my story and for your feedback much appre4ciated as is your good luck message. you too have a great day Cheers

Comment from crybry67

Excellent

Great little story, I imagine it to be a difficult task, but it is one you did well. You chose a nice piece of art work to complement, best of luck...

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016

Hi crybry67. Many thanks for stoppong by to read my little story it was quite difficult bit I enjoyed the challenge and appreciate your feedback and best of luck wishes Cheers

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

Great use of this difficult style. My poetry always winds up sounding like limericks. "There once was a girl from Nantucket." You know the rest.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016

Hi Thomas, Thanks for reading and reviewing my work for this contest I write more poetry but enjoy the occasional short story challenge so I am pleased for your comments Cheers

Comment from mvbrooks

Excellent

Very creative use of the full alphabet and highlighting the first letter made it easier for the reader to see the full alphabet. Good luck in your contest.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016

Hi mybrooks. I am glad you had a read of my story for this contest it was fun to get something that sounded reasonable although a bit left field LOL So many Thanks for your review and good luck message Cheers

Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

Zebras are such unique animals.

However, yellow-striped?

Would that not indicate them being cowards?

Should be an interesting entry into this contest.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2016

Hi Brett, No a yellow Zebra would be quite unique instead, LOL Thanks for your review and great rating for my story Cheers

Comment from June Sargent

Excellent

Really enjoyed the story - actually made sense while painting an amusing picture. Wasn't just a mish mash of words thrown together. Enjoyed the read. Should do well in the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2016

Hi June, I am so pleased you thouht the story worked it was indeed a challenge but I had fun and wanted it to make sense. Thanks for your review Cheers

Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

This is well done. Exactly 26 words.The story line is consistant and easy to understand. It is well presented too. Good job in this difficult contest

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2016

Hi RYME4U. Thank you very much for reading my entry for this rather challenging contest. I thought this may work so I appreciate your comments Cheers