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Brown eyes

Rictameter

5 total reviews 
Comment from Richard J
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An excellent work, Susan! : )
Deeply fetching to the mind, heart, and emotions!

Reflects the wonder of your sweet caring ... thank you for sharing! ~ Richard

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2016

reply by the author on 29-Oct-2016
    That "artwork" is my LILLY!!!!! stunning child huh! thanks for reading Richard!!! hugs!!!
Comment from l.raven
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there is nothing more beautiful then the innocents of a child's eyes....I have four young grandkids...they have amazing eye's...very well written...and a beautiful picture...

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2016

reply by the author on 23-Sep-2016
    I agree! this is my daughter lilly.. at about 5 yrs.of age...thanks for reading and the great review!!
reply by l.raven on 23-Sep-2016
    you are so very welcome...she is beautiful...and your picture priceless xxoo Love
Comment from frogbook
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A sweet picture to complement this descriptive poem about a sweet child with beautiful, expressive eyes. Best of luck in the voting booth.

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2016

reply by the author on 23-Sep-2016
    Awe thank you so much for the kind review!!!! much appreciated!!
Comment from michaelcahill
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Hi! Just wandered over to your portfolio as I've been a terrible fan lately. Sorry. Terribly busy and buried and all that. I see this is a contest entry, so I'll pretend not to know your wonderful self. LOL
Perfect form and a very nice easy read. Is this gentleman yours? I'm planning to live long enough to hang out with him one day. There are bound to be plenty of leftovers. HAAAAAAHAHAHA!! Good luck in this. A hard form to make poetic and you've done so to the max. mikey

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2016

reply by the author on 23-Sep-2016
    Yes, Iv'e missed you...and I have hard time with patience....so can you stop working so hard??? That would help :-p....and yes, this is my little lilly! ...at about 5 yrs.....I spent the day in the hospital with her again..(tests and more tests)....and came up with this while waiting...guess was just looking in those eyes...
Comment from KyColonel Randal
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Thank you for sharing. I am counting the correct amount of syllables in all lines of this Rictameter. Thus, your poem should meet the criteria of the contest you have entered. Good luck with your contest entry!

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2016

reply by the author on 25-Sep-2016
    Awe thanks so much for reading and the great review!!!