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Take a Tablet

Free verse /favourite object

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Comment from Sis Cat
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This is quite nice. I enjoyed your list poem which flowed quickly and chaotically reflecting "Life's cornucopia or info overload." You captured life today. Sometimes it feels that way and you want to shut things off.

Thank you for sharing. Congratulation for placing in the contest.

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2016
    Thanks for reading and critique zanya
Comment from RYME4U
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This is a very inclusive free verse list. It sounds like the news in general is your favorite prized possession.Very clever and innovative.

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2016
    Thanks for a great review zanya
Comment from tollyfaye
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I really like what you have done here. To know all that I would need a tablet, and to deal with it I would need a tablet like motrin. Good work. I made it what I wanted it to be. :) Asprin and off to bed for me. :)

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2016
    Glad you enjoyed it zanya
Comment from Steve Blair
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Can you imagine living in times when most of those things didn't exist? But I'm thinking during those times, most humans were more worried about living from day to day. Which over stimulation is worse? Great poem. Not cluttered with thesaurus driven babble.

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2016


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2016
    Thanks for reading and especially the final comment !zanya