The Speeder.
A true event short police story3 total reviews
Comment from Craigitar
This is a well written, interesting and odd story. Not only did the ironically named Mrs. Swift break the law, in the end, she thumbed her nose at justice by dying. Who got the last laugh? Fun little slice of life recalled.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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This is a well written, interesting and odd story. Not only did the ironically named Mrs. Swift break the law, in the end, she thumbed her nose at justice by dying. Who got the last laugh? Fun little slice of life recalled.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Thanks for the review.
Comment from jlsavell
philipcatshill,
lol... truth is often stranger than any fiction. This is hysterical. Poor lady, she had no idea and you, what did you do? loved the story... jlsavell
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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philipcatshill,
lol... truth is often stranger than any fiction. This is hysterical. Poor lady, she had no idea and you, what did you do? loved the story... jlsavell
Comment Written 03-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2017
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Thanks for the review. What did I do? Well, I just stood there with my mouth agape!
Comment from humpwhistle
My grandmother actually thought it was dangerous to use her review mirror while driving. She thought it was there just to help her check her lipstick before getting out of the car.
I hear tinges of 'police report-ese' in this short piece.
I'll bet you've got a million of 'em.
Peace, Lee
but nevertheless--in this context, but and nevertheless mean the same thing. I'd dump one or the other.
This encounter didn't lead to an arrest, but nevertheless, definitely fell into the bizarre, and also perhaps, into the classification of mundane as it involved a written recommendation that the driving licence authority should review a nonagenarian lady's capability to drive ... --this is a long, and convoluted sentence. Think about breaking it up, or leaving some of it out.
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My grandmother actually thought it was dangerous to use her review mirror while driving. She thought it was there just to help her check her lipstick before getting out of the car.
I hear tinges of 'police report-ese' in this short piece.
I'll bet you've got a million of 'em.
Peace, Lee
but nevertheless--in this context, but and nevertheless mean the same thing. I'd dump one or the other.
This encounter didn't lead to an arrest, but nevertheless, definitely fell into the bizarre, and also perhaps, into the classification of mundane as it involved a written recommendation that the driving licence authority should review a nonagenarian lady's capability to drive ... --this is a long, and convoluted sentence. Think about breaking it up, or leaving some of it out.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2016
