I enjoyed reading your poem. You have some beautiful lines here. I especially liked the following ones:
"a land sown with the seeds of silence"
"you are too shy to love a future dream"
"you wanted an angel to share the space in the middle"
It was an enjoyable read. Fairly easy to follow, the concepts were portrayed adequately and pleasantly full of feeling. The semi obscure wording might to need to have an attachment explanation. Over all an enjoyable romp in vague dream-like style.