Comment from AnnaLinda

Excellent

Wow!

Congratulations on your 2nd place FanStory win!
I see why. I love your message, presentation and
brilliant use of words to paint this uplifting message.

So glad I stopped by,
Linda

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2016

Thanks Linda for your lovely review with kind words. It was the review and gave a blue ribbon. Mary

reply by AnnaLinda on 23-Dec-2016

Oh good, Mary. Perhaps you have more like that. I'll take a look soon;)

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Nicely done four line poem using dance as a metaphor for love. There are steps you take when creating a relationship. The first is to let it flow.

Congrats on placing in the contest.

Keep writing

dragonpoet

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2016

Thanks for the congrats and the review much appreciated Mary

reply by dragonpoet on 28-Sep-2016

My pleasure, Mary.

Joan

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

A well constructed poem in this 4-line format. The exhortation to dance is well amplified in the following lines and the phrasing is perfect. I like this one better than any of the others I have read in this contest so far. Good luck with it!

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2016

Thanks for your encouraging review I really appreciate your comments, Mary

Comment from KyColonel Randal

Excellent

Thank you for sharing, and for pointing out in the author's notes that there are indeed no capitals in this piece. It does appear that your syllable count is 1-5-5-9, and thus this poem meets the criteria of the contest in which you have entered it. Good luck with your contest entry!

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2016

Thanks for your excellent review, Mary

Comment from I am Cat

Excellent

I love the message of this poem. I think you've really been able to get a good message into four lines (not an easy feat) ;)
I especially like your last two lines and can relate to them. I think you've used the wording to advantage. Great job and good luck in the contest, Mary!
Cat

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2016

thanks for your great comments and excellent review, Mary

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

What an enchanting image you selected to reinforce you inspiring words! Your use of the imperative is very effective in this four-line poem. Best wishes in the contest- Joan

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2016

Thanks Joan for your great comments about my four line poem, I do appreciate your review Mary

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

Love your four line poem, beautiful advice, you only have the now, so live it with a fury, with the picture, this is a glorious presentation, blessings...

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2016

Thanks for your review I do appreciate it, Mary

Comment from Domino 2

Excellent

The last time I 'danced' like that down the street, I got TOO 'passionate' and was arrested by the cops, Mary. ;-)

Seriously, excellent sentiments in a top short write.

Cheers, Ray xx

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2016

thanks Ray you are a character indeed Mary

reply by the author on 30-Aug-2016

Thanks Ray you are a character Mary

Comment from mrsmajor

Excellent

Hi,
The picture, and the words make for an interesting package...and was well written, following the syllable count...

It said to me...Stay true to what we feel in our heart, let our spirituality, be a part of our being, however it shows...just Believe in self...

Thanks for sharing...I enjoyed this shot poem...

Blessings,
Victoria

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2016

Thank you so much Victoria, for your great comments in your review, Mary

reply by mrsmajor on 30-Aug-2016

You're quite welcome, it was my pleasure!

Comment from Annette Gulliver

Excellent

Lovely artwork and a verse to match.
If only we could all let go, and dance with wild abandon, filling ourselves with confidence, and trusting our inner self.
:-) Annette

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2016

Thanks Annette I appreciate your comments and review Mary