Take Back Our Control
Our Nation Is A laughing Stock3 total reviews
Comment from Rasmine
Okay, we can agree to disagree. I really don't want to close our borders off--my grandparents on both sides of my family were immigrants--the only real true American is an American Indian--the rest of us are immigrants. But we can agree to disagree.
I like the idea of a $15.00 for minimum wage, and your food stamp idea (I would include pet food too), and not touching the retirement fund. I really think that should be left alone entirely.
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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2016
Okay, we can agree to disagree. I really don't want to close our borders off--my grandparents on both sides of my family were immigrants--the only real true American is an American Indian--the rest of us are immigrants. But we can agree to disagree.
I like the idea of a $15.00 for minimum wage, and your food stamp idea (I would include pet food too), and not touching the retirement fund. I really think that should be left alone entirely.
:)
Comment Written 25-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2016
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so glad you agree
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Should have a warning for language.
Some viable options that would indeed go a long way in bettering America.
"up-front cost" should be "up-front costs".
"think Of America" should be "think of America".
"white house" should be "White House".
"taken it from I" should be "taken it from. I".
"of our country" should be "of our country."
"families to feed their family's" should be "families to feed themselves".
"homeless they" should be "homeless. They"
"White house and all" should be "White House and all".
"brainwashed to believing" would read better as "brainwashed into believing".
Piece needs some editing especially since it is a contest entry.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2016
Should have a warning for language.
Some viable options that would indeed go a long way in bettering America.
"up-front cost" should be "up-front costs".
"think Of America" should be "think of America".
"white house" should be "White House".
"taken it from I" should be "taken it from. I".
"of our country" should be "of our country."
"families to feed their family's" should be "families to feed themselves".
"homeless they" should be "homeless. They"
"White house and all" should be "White House and all".
"brainwashed to believing" would read better as "brainwashed into believing".
Piece needs some editing especially since it is a contest entry.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2016
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THANK YOU FOT THE HEADS UP SORRY I WAS LATE GETTING BACK TO YOU HUBBY HAS HEALTH ISSUES WE HAVE TO TAKE CARE OF
Comment from judester
Do not forget, we the people. This is a good list with what is wrong and should be fixed in America. I would also add that big food producers should stop bribing the government, allowing poisons like genetically modified wheat and high fructose corn syrup to be in almost every thing we eat.
America's obesity problems and these two products came at the same time. I don't think that was a coincidence. An over weight nation means many cannot work and drain the health care resources. I think the first thing I would do as President is to focus on a mentally and physically fit nation. Very good work I enjoyed your point of view, cheers, j
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2016
Do not forget, we the people. This is a good list with what is wrong and should be fixed in America. I would also add that big food producers should stop bribing the government, allowing poisons like genetically modified wheat and high fructose corn syrup to be in almost every thing we eat.
America's obesity problems and these two products came at the same time. I don't think that was a coincidence. An over weight nation means many cannot work and drain the health care resources. I think the first thing I would do as President is to focus on a mentally and physically fit nation. Very good work I enjoyed your point of view, cheers, j
Comment Written 28-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2016
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Thank you