Comment from pharp

Excellent

Outstanding job my friend in the penning of this short poem. Very few words says a whole lot. Don't be surprised if you are the winner of this contest. This is the best yet and you have my vote. The very best to you in the contest! Blessings...................Portia

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2016

Thank you for the stellar review. glad you liked it.

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This seems a solid entry for the contest
There are no stated rules
as to what is a short poem
But your has two good rhymes
only seven words and ten syllables
with good humor and a fine picture
Looks good on all counts
Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2016

Thanks for the kind review.

Comment from Pyrrho

Excellent

Yo ho ho and a bulge in the pants to you too. This is a great giggle generator; not a belly-laugh, but a loud giggle is inexorable. Well done you.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2016

Glad you got a chuckle. Thanks for reviewing.