Dream Garden
I always wanted a garden like this5 total reviews
Comment from EMB
Your sense of place is one of taking what nature has given and making it just a little bit better. This entry set me at ease, and I enjoyed it. Great job.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016
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Your sense of place is one of taking what nature has given and making it just a little bit better. This entry set me at ease, and I enjoyed it. Great job.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016
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I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading.
Comment from Judy Couch
I love your garden without having seen it. Your description is so good that I can visualize it. There's nothing like being able to enjoy the out of doors regardless of the season.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2016
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I love your garden without having seen it. Your description is so good that I can visualize it. There's nothing like being able to enjoy the out of doors regardless of the season.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2016
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Thanks, Judy. You're very kind.
Comment from country ranch writer
lovely story and presentation and I love those grumpy cats too so much for all the creatures at home and around to watch and be thankful for
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2016
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lovely story and presentation and I love those grumpy cats too so much for all the creatures at home and around to watch and be thankful for
Comment Written 22-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2016
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Thanks so much for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed my little story.
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Comment from Gracie619
What an amazingly peaceful-sounding place you have described. The description just had me wanting to walk right into the scene and hang out there with you. Perhaps with some coffee and listening to the birds and waiting on the cats. Thank you for sharing such a pretty memory, and good luck to you in the contest!
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2016
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What an amazingly peaceful-sounding place you have described. The description just had me wanting to walk right into the scene and hang out there with you. Perhaps with some coffee and listening to the birds and waiting on the cats. Thank you for sharing such a pretty memory, and good luck to you in the contest!
Comment Written 22-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2016
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I'm glad you liked my description, Gracie.
Comment from papa55mike
The peace of finding ones place in the world is truly worth the wait. This is well written and I love the style. Please check the next to last paragraph, there's a period that needs to be moved over and need a couple paragraph breaks on the last line between the first and second paragraph. All in all, great job. Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2016
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The peace of finding ones place in the world is truly worth the wait. This is well written and I love the style. Please check the next to last paragraph, there's a period that needs to be moved over and need a couple paragraph breaks on the last line between the first and second paragraph. All in all, great job. Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 22-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2016
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Thanks for your review. I'm not sure which period you say needs to be moved over, can you tell me?
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I'm sorry, it's third paragraph from the bottom, "But it is a big deal ." Hope that helps because that's all that matters.
mike
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Thanks, that one is there on purpose, even if it's a bi weird.
