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Comment from His Grayness
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I CERTAINLY wish I had six stars for this delightful work. It's well done in perfect rhyme and the packaging is perfect in artwork and font layout. I enjoyed this very much and respect the fair and unbalanced delivery of the personas of Donald and Crooked Hillary. HIS GRAYNESS

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2016


reply by the author on 14-Aug-2016
    Thank you, Vance. It's amazing how much one can get away with in politics. It makes citizens lose faith. No one seems to have any honor, which makes it impossible to respect them. I do appreciate your review and comments.
Comment from RYME4U
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This is a great summing up of both candidates.We really don't have much of a choice in the upcoming election...Both are flawed.I like the rhyme and rhythm and the presentation. Great job!

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2016


reply by the author on 14-Aug-2016
    Thank you, Charlotte. I appreciate your review.
Comment from Ideasaregems-Dawn
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I don't think I have ever been as grateful that I'm not American as I am now, with the choices you have for your upcoming Presidency election. Your poem is great, but your notes? WOW - kudos.

I have to keep this short, I'm afraid though - yet AGAIN I am experiencing problems with my laptop! (...sigh...I wonder just how much further behind I can fall, how many more reviewers I can lose...!!!)

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2016


reply by the author on 14-Aug-2016
    Thank you so much, Dawn, for your great review and comments. The most important thing is that our country somehow manages to survive. God help us. I hope your laptop troubles right themselves. :)
reply by Ideasaregems-Dawn on 14-Aug-2016
    You're very welcome,my friend. (I hope so too!)
Comment from Thomas Bowling
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Brillant poem about two dim wits. the line,

"Says she'll win the White House, bring along Bill"
Is reason enough to keep her out.

Good luck in the contest. If this doesn't win demand a recount. It worked for Al Gore didn't it.

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2016


reply by the author on 14-Aug-2016
    Thank you for the five stars. Appreciate your review and comments which I agree with.
Comment from spanishlover
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This is really a clever poem. I actually learned some more facts that I missed. You have assembled the whole picture of Hillary and Donald well. I especially liked: "bring along Bill" (are we suppose to be thrilled?") "lamestream media," and the last line - so very true! Nice piece of work and it did take work. Thanks for that. Blessings

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2016


reply by the author on 14-Aug-2016
    Hi Spanishlover. Thank you for your wonderful review and rating. It was a lot of work, but fun, too. A special thanks for recognized that.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
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Caricatures could not be more spot on.

This is one election that only leaves voters shaking their heads as neither candidate is really worthy of being President.

Unfortunately, no one else on the horizon has stepped forward and proven they are either.

So, I suppose its pick your poison.

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 Comment Written 14-Aug-2016


reply by the author on 14-Aug-2016
    So true. Let's just hope that whichever gets in office loves America and wants to preserve it. I appreciate your fine review and comments.
Comment from William Ross
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hahaha, yes, very good, nicely done on the political rant. I don't know, this whole election bothers me. this should do well, good luck and have a great day.

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 Comment Written 14-Aug-2016


reply by the author on 14-Aug-2016
    Thank you, William. It's a mess, that's for sure.