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Banana Split

Yummy dessert

23 total reviews 
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
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susanjohn....lmao! This is a great entry into the contest; easy to see why it won! Great job. Love:
Chocolate, caramel, strawberry sauce
This dessert is certainly the boss!
And look! I'm also getting my fruit
Lord, I hope this doesn't make me toot!

Very cute!!! God bless and hugs, Susanne

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2016

reply by the author on 08-Aug-2016
    Hey Susanne, i has so much fun with this one!!! was feeling kinds goofy!!! glad you liked it!!
Comment from DR DIP
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shit how nice does that desert look?! I have a sweet tooth this could be my downfall lol
this is a fun little ditty basically written in AABB rhyme scheme which creates the rhythm and beat perfectly thanks for sharing

dip

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2016

reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
    eating a raspberry dove bar with wrist in splint and typing with one finger !!!!! i had fun with this contest!!!!
reply by DR DIP on 03-Aug-2016
    haha how did you hurt your wrist?

    dip
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2016
    treadmill running ..was going pretty fast, got distracted,whacked it bad against side...6 weeks ago,went last night to doc...apparently ive been walking around with a fracture wrist. ...ill be fine.
reply by DR DIP on 04-Aug-2016
    ooh that's no good
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2016
    6weeks! walking around with it hurting...such a dork! good news?? its healing :-)
reply by DR DIP on 04-Aug-2016
    well that's the main thing
Comment from Judy Couch
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This expresses well your liking for banana split. I love it too. In fact, I love any dessert that is made with ice cream.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2016

reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016
    Thank you so much judy for the great review!!!! I had fun with this one!!
Comment from Gianinas
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Fun to read, and look at, I wanted one for myself ..not ice-cream, just any kind of desert...good luck in the contest!
Gianina

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2016

reply by the author on 01-Aug-2016
    Aw thanks so much for reading and the great review!!
Comment from rjuselius
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hah .lol. this is an entertaining piece of poetry dear anonymous! you have turned this age old favorite to new heights. very well presented and a smile.
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings!
rebekka x

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2016

reply by the author on 01-Aug-2016
    Thanks so much!!! I had fun with this one!!
Comment from royowen
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I really like this marvellous entry in this delicious deserts contest, I'm with you. The narrative is a gaily rollicking one, the theme is bright, upbeat and "delicious" a nice, even, imaginative text, that is lighthearted and ably supported with a aabb rhyme scheme, well done, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2016

reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016
    Again, another review BETTER then the poem! Thanks friend, glad you liked it! I had fun with this one... :-)))
reply by royowen on 31-Jul-2016
    Most welcome
Comment from Bill O'Bier
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A great entry..... Nice use of language and rhymes. Good choice of artwork. Good luck in the contest.

Wishing you the best,
Bill

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2016

reply by the author on 30-Jul-2016
    Thanks Bill! much appreciated!!
Comment from Domino 2
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I won't mention the meter, Susan. ;-)

Loads of fun imagery, and determination to have your treat even if it makes you 'gain a few extra pounds', or even, 'toot'. :-)

Congratulations on your recent contest wins.

Have a lovely weekend, Ray xx


 Comment Written 30-Jul-2016

reply by the author on 30-Jul-2016
    I know Ray, sometimes I feel it, sometimes i don't...just me. Thanks for reading and the great review!! much appreciated!..take care
Comment from liz burgoyne
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I can visualize the person who is talking this way. The hot pink says it all. Your poem made me laugh. You could consider changing lips to hips.

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 Comment Written 29-Jul-2016

reply by the author on 30-Jul-2016
    Thank you.
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Great image.
-I don't like bananas, but I would eat everything else.
-Good use of rhyme, detail, and humor:
"Chocolate, caramel, strawberry sauce"
-I like the concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 29-Jul-2016

reply by the author on 30-Jul-2016
    Thank you thank you!!! much appreciated..take care friend
reply by Pam (respa) on 30-Jul-2016
    You are very welcome.