Little Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 423 "Scenery Made, for Artists"Small and Specialty Poems
11 total reviews
Comment from Selina Stambi
As always, you educate me, Tom - I learned a lot of new words today!
Love chiaras ... thingummybob-thingy . :)
A delightful piece. Yes, I did get the sense of pondering wonder as I read.
My favourite line ... Scenery made, for artists. It's a great stanza-clincher.
Well done, friend (as always).
Have a wonderful week. Hope your daughter's doing better.
Sonali
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016
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As always, you educate me, Tom - I learned a lot of new words today!
Love chiaras ... thingummybob-thingy . :)
A delightful piece. Yes, I did get the sense of pondering wonder as I read.
My favourite line ... Scenery made, for artists. It's a great stanza-clincher.
Well done, friend (as always).
Have a wonderful week. Hope your daughter's doing better.
Sonali
Comment Written 25-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016
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Thank you Sonali. Always glad to educate and entertain. Nope, she's still doesn't np poorly.
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Sorry to hear that. I'll remember her in my prayers, Tom.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
I did so enjoy the poem Tom. I had to do the song in my head because my computer just will not do sound. The poem paints a pretty picture in each situation. Thank you for sharing your notes with us, no pun intended. Nancy
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2016
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I did so enjoy the poem Tom. I had to do the song in my head because my computer just will not do sound. The poem paints a pretty picture in each situation. Thank you for sharing your notes with us, no pun intended. Nancy
Comment Written 24-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2016
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Thank you Nancy. I am pleased you enjoyed my work and captured the rhythm of it.
Comment from Pantygynt
I could read this with the strains of the sound of silence ringing in my ears. It brought a wry smile to my lips because graphic art was not one of the skills my father handed down to me at least not when colour is involved. I am better off sticking to poetry, there was a short while in the eighties when I tried but the work is entirely devoid of talent. i know my limitatrions. A fine lyric on a beautiful situation.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2016
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I could read this with the strains of the sound of silence ringing in my ears. It brought a wry smile to my lips because graphic art was not one of the skills my father handed down to me at least not when colour is involved. I am better off sticking to poetry, there was a short while in the eighties when I tried but the work is entirely devoid of talent. i know my limitatrions. A fine lyric on a beautiful situation.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2016
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Thank you Pantygynt. I will stick to the camera lens too.
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi, Treischel,
"Scenery Made for Artist" is an exceptional poem fully deserving six beautiful brilliant stars. It is a feat few would try; to translate visual art into poetry or vice versa. In my opinion you have achieved this well. I appreciate the art appreciation lesson. Lack of this has been a failing of my education. It was necessary to understand your poem.
Your friend and colleague,
Preston
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2016
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Hi, Treischel,
"Scenery Made for Artist" is an exceptional poem fully deserving six beautiful brilliant stars. It is a feat few would try; to translate visual art into poetry or vice versa. In my opinion you have achieved this well. I appreciate the art appreciation lesson. Lack of this has been a failing of my education. It was necessary to understand your poem.
Your friend and colleague,
Preston
Comment Written 24-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2016
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Thank you Preston, for this review, as well as the stars. Here the Art lesson was free too. I am pleased that you enjoyed it. I wish the image on the poem had come out as clear as my actual photo. It is a bit bleary here.
Comment from Hayley Solomon
Lovely. I sang it to myself with sounds of silence in my head and it was
marvellous Liked all the painters turns and the unique, imaginative manner of discoursing on art.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2016
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Lovely. I sang it to myself with sounds of silence in my head and it was
marvellous Liked all the painters turns and the unique, imaginative manner of discoursing on art.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2016
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Thank you very much Hayley, I am pleased you could feel that melody in it.
Comment from poetbear
What a photo.What a write to accompany it.
You have outdone yourself this time.
You were always one if my favorites along with Gungalo( she should( rest in peace).
Great use of vocabulary.
Excellent poetic technique.
Wish I had ten stars for you.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2016
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What a photo.What a write to accompany it.
You have outdone yourself this time.
You were always one if my favorites along with Gungalo( she should( rest in peace).
Great use of vocabulary.
Excellent poetic technique.
Wish I had ten stars for you.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2016
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Thank you Poetbear. That is very high praise, as I always looked up to her.
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My pleasure.
Comment from Joan E.
This one is not a continuation of your butterfly theme, but it has a very appealing theme. I do hope you put the image on canvas, and thanks for the summary of Art 101. I enjoyed your lyrical stanzas and mixed meter, along with your rhymes and repeats that add to the intensity of the scene. More cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2016
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This one is not a continuation of your butterfly theme, but it has a very appealing theme. I do hope you put the image on canvas, and thanks for the summary of Art 101. I enjoyed your lyrical stanzas and mixed meter, along with your rhymes and repeats that add to the intensity of the scene. More cheers- Joan
Comment Written 23-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2016
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Thank you Joan. I appreciate those comments.
Comment from tennisracquet37
I loved your poem! I could just hear Simon and Garfunkel's tune as I read your poem! You were also very descriptive which was nice! Nice job and keep up the good work!
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2016
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I loved your poem! I could just hear Simon and Garfunkel's tune as I read your poem! You were also very descriptive which was nice! Nice job and keep up the good work!
Comment Written 23-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2016
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Thank you tennis-racquet. Glad it worked, then.
Comment from RoostyNester
Beautiful poem with beautiful sight! How majestic the work of God! He lays out the perfect picture and it is taken to brush and word. How beautiful the natural is! Nothing in the picture to flatter it or make it unique. It has all the glory just as is! You done a terrific job with word and camera!
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2016
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Beautiful poem with beautiful sight! How majestic the work of God! He lays out the perfect picture and it is taken to brush and word. How beautiful the natural is! Nothing in the picture to flatter it or make it unique. It has all the glory just as is! You done a terrific job with word and camera!
Comment Written 23-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2016
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Thank you very much RoostyNester.
Comment from kintesiegel
this is a very pleasant poem that approaches a beautiful landscape from a multiplicity of perspectives and disciplines. it is set to music as well! Quite a work demonstrating a great deal of attention and care.
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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2016
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this is a very pleasant poem that approaches a beautiful landscape from a multiplicity of perspectives and disciplines. it is set to music as well! Quite a work demonstrating a great deal of attention and care.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2016
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Thank you kites gel.
